All Comments on 'And Mom Makes Three'

It started out great but you lost me when the mom started to tell them what to do. Should have had the sin giving the orders instead of him cowardly backing off so much.

Hot story but please get an editor & fix those shocking typos & misused words.

Great story! I caught on to the setup pretty quick, but it was still awesome watching it unfold.

Nice plot twist loved it

I couldn't remember why this story bugged me, so I reread it. Crazy hot, but I really didn't like that his mom and his GF were actively cuckolding him for a month. Seemed like quite the betrayal, especially considering that it wasn't started with the intention of him joining. She just wanted to bang his mom, and his mom was fine with cucking her trusting, loving son. Then it occurred to them to throw him a bone. And the constant shots at his intelligence were a turn-off. But it was hot, unquestionably.

one of the best stories i ever" read!!! loved it

Did your mother get knocked up by you got my mom and aunt sametime pregnant

Yourself and fuzzy pen are clearly the best authors on Lit.

You should publish stories or write screenplays for porn production sites…

Your stories on film would ba amazing!

As always, is there a part 2 in the works,,,?

I suppose i forgot to send my first comment...

Anyway I think Lovedefacto's comment earlier is the correct one. I do not understand why people think sex with same gender isnt cheating.

I would have walked out as well.

I must admit tho that the story is very well written, and was heading towards 5 stars until the cheating got revealed.

Hot story, but the month of fucking around behind his back urks me. Theres a girlfriend that is so sexually charged, but holds back? 5/5 till the end, 2/5. we'll hit the middle. 3.5 rounded up.

Awesome story loved all of it and the threesome at the end was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Absolutely amazing!!! That was boiling hot

Thanks mate this was a bloody good read. Had my cock as hard as hell,

what a dumb pussy. story ruined because of this dumb cuckold son

Free ? I'd pay by the word. You just keep getting better and better. I feel I cheated by only giving 5 stars. Thank you for using your skills to create work like this...

Very well written story how they got Sean going and he finally gets to fuck his mom, but I think you should have continued with more maybe they all live together and have some children. Gave it 5 stars.

5 stars!

Beautifully written with great multi-layered character development holding the tension in a hot and effective way!

Well written. Enjoyed the every page.

Very good and I did enjoy it, just wish i hadn't read last half of last page to discover Erin had cheated on him with his mother for a month. I know it's my hang up from being devastated when it happened to me.

The story was very good until the end. That "plot twist" is so overplayed and completely ruin the story. I want to read about incest with hypnosis/mind control. I searched for that combination. You wasted my time. I don't know if anyone's kink is "fake hypnosis" but if so, they'll have a ton of stuff to jerk off to, there's like a thousand of these stories mislabeled as the real thing.

It's like if you read an incest story and at the end the "plot twist" is the people fucking are not related. So stupid.

I enjoyed this immensely, even though the end reveal I thought spoiled it slightly. Still thoroughly entertaining read.

Reading this story was a fabulous experience. The sex is so hot and the verbal exchanges so tantalizing. I did begin to think it was a setup between Carla and Erin. God, how lucky can a guy get: a super hot, super eager to explore girlfriend and a super hot mother who wants to participate in it all. How will he ever be able to leave home. Your descriptions are divine with so much exciting and tantalizing detail with so much anticipation. Women really are the masters of sex and loving. Bravo!

I liked the story very much.Srange what our human minds can come up with.

Awesome story!

It was a good story all and all though the ending could have been better

WOW!!!! That was fun! Loved the story, and details, and the awesome twist at the end. Thank you!!!!!

What y neat threesome! More please.😛

It would be nice to find an author who could proof read

Fun little romp. 5/5... I wonder how many ppl saw the setup and when? For me, it was when he fell onto the floor.

While I usually love your preludes, this one really did it right. While I never had any experience with my mother, I can see that in this sexy generation it definitely could happen. BTW don't listen to the nitpickers. It's just a story.

I don't want this to be received as a gripe or complaint, but I was practically yelling at Sean to praise his amazing girlfriend, Erin, but when the twist included infidelity, my heart sank.

You've got one Hell of an Imagination! I think you are the master storyteller of all Literotica!

Excellent story, and as usual, the only flaw is your lack of proofreading. Forget the critical comments and those who want to alter the story somehow. Yes, it could go different directions, but you continue to tell them your way with the twist at the end. That’s why I am really liking your writing-keep it up! Wish my girlfriend and I would have had the same experience with my mom. Never gave it a thought back then.

Totally plausible. Guy has the hottest piece of ass in the school, she's totally into him and is a total freak in the sack and is OK with his incest fantasies, oh and she's fine with sharing him. Plus his mom is super hot too. Come on man. Pure male fantasy, no realism sadly. And didn't she say she would never fool around on him yet it's revealed she was fucking his mom for a bit, admittedly in an effort to get her to be the other woman that she would share Sean with? I guess it worked out in the end but it's a little weird that she would do that without saying anything to him first. And yes Sean is dense as lead.

Other than the mom's treatment of Sean and the girlfriends infidelity good story

Excellent even on the THIRD reading!

LeB

Sure would like to know what happens next.

Excellent story craft

What a hoot(er)!

Awesome story. I would've had him cum in his mom and had his gf eat her out

OMG, what a fucking hot story!

So Hot. Your mastery of dialogue, both sexy and funny, is unsurpassed. This is only the second story of yours I've read. I plan to read all of them.

Massively sexy story. Great description and action.

Jeez! Some commenters are easily pleased, huh? While yes, I admit that the sex was hot, I’m not a fan of the characters personalities. And I do mean ALL of them. The son was way too stupid and meek. The mom was a bitch and a hard-ass. The girlfriend was too domineering and both her and the mom can burn in hell for cheating on the guy. Obviously “monogamy” isn’t in their vocabulary’s.

As I read I felt increasingly uneasy about the power dynamic and wished everyone could be on a more even footing. Maybe it would have come off better with a more drawn out plot? Also, very predictable, what with the mom and Erin being in on it together. Same with the mom catching them playing the “mom” role play. But that’s forgivable. After all, gotta get to the incest somehow.

Damn! This story just about begs for a second part. What happens next??