All Comments on 'And Mom Makes Three'

Damn! This story just about begs for a second part. What happens next??

Jeez! Some commenters are easily pleased, huh? While yes, I admit that the sex was hot, I’m not a fan of the characters personalities. And I do mean ALL of them. The son was way too stupid and meek. The mom was a bitch and a hard-ass. The girlfriend was too domineering and both her and the mom can burn in hell for cheating on the guy. Obviously “monogamy” isn’t in their vocabulary’s.

As I read I felt increasingly uneasy about the power dynamic and wished everyone could be on a more even footing. Maybe it would have come off better with a more drawn out plot? Also, very predictable, what with the mom and Erin being in on it together. Same with the mom catching them playing the “mom” role play. But that’s forgivable. After all, gotta get to the incest somehow.

Massively sexy story. Great description and action.

So Hot. Your mastery of dialogue, both sexy and funny, is unsurpassed. This is only the second story of yours I've read. I plan to read all of them.

OMG, what a fucking hot story!

Awesome story. I would've had him cum in his mom and had his gf eat her out

What a hoot(er)!

Excellent story craft

Sure would like to know what happens next.

Excellent even on the THIRD reading!

LeB

Other than the mom's treatment of Sean and the girlfriends infidelity good story

Totally plausible. Guy has the hottest piece of ass in the school, she's totally into him and is a total freak in the sack and is OK with his incest fantasies, oh and she's fine with sharing him. Plus his mom is super hot too. Come on man. Pure male fantasy, no realism sadly. And didn't she say she would never fool around on him yet it's revealed she was fucking his mom for a bit, admittedly in an effort to get her to be the other woman that she would share Sean with? I guess it worked out in the end but it's a little weird that she would do that without saying anything to him first. And yes Sean is dense as lead.

Excellent story, and as usual, the only flaw is your lack of proofreading. Forget the critical comments and those who want to alter the story somehow. Yes, it could go different directions, but you continue to tell them your way with the twist at the end. That’s why I am really liking your writing-keep it up! Wish my girlfriend and I would have had the same experience with my mom. Never gave it a thought back then.

You've got one Hell of an Imagination! I think you are the master storyteller of all Literotica!

I don't want this to be received as a gripe or complaint, but I was practically yelling at Sean to praise his amazing girlfriend, Erin, but when the twist included infidelity, my heart sank.

While I usually love your preludes, this one really did it right. While I never had any experience with my mother, I can see that in this sexy generation it definitely could happen. BTW don't listen to the nitpickers. It's just a story.

Fun little romp. 5/5... I wonder how many ppl saw the setup and when? For me, it was when he fell onto the floor.

It would be nice to find an author who could proof read

What y neat threesome! More please.😛

WOW!!!! That was fun! Loved the story, and details, and the awesome twist at the end. Thank you!!!!!

It was a good story all and all though the ending could have been better

Awesome story!

I liked the story very much.Srange what our human minds can come up with.

Reading this story was a fabulous experience. The sex is so hot and the verbal exchanges so tantalizing. I did begin to think it was a setup between Carla and Erin. God, how lucky can a guy get: a super hot, super eager to explore girlfriend and a super hot mother who wants to participate in it all. How will he ever be able to leave home. Your descriptions are divine with so much exciting and tantalizing detail with so much anticipation. Women really are the masters of sex and loving. Bravo!

I enjoyed this immensely, even though the end reveal I thought spoiled it slightly. Still thoroughly entertaining read.

The story was very good until the end. That "plot twist" is so overplayed and completely ruin the story. I want to read about incest with hypnosis/mind control. I searched for that combination. You wasted my time. I don't know if anyone's kink is "fake hypnosis" but if so, they'll have a ton of stuff to jerk off to, there's like a thousand of these stories mislabeled as the real thing.

It's like if you read an incest story and at the end the "plot twist" is the people fucking are not related. So stupid.

Very good and I did enjoy it, just wish i hadn't read last half of last page to discover Erin had cheated on him with his mother for a month. I know it's my hang up from being devastated when it happened to me.

Well written. Enjoyed the every page.

Beautifully written with great multi-layered character development holding the tension in a hot and effective way!

5 stars!

Very well written story how they got Sean going and he finally gets to fuck his mom, but I think you should have continued with more maybe they all live together and have some children. Gave it 5 stars.

Free ? I'd pay by the word. You just keep getting better and better. I feel I cheated by only giving 5 stars. Thank you for using your skills to create work like this...

what a dumb pussy. story ruined because of this dumb cuckold son

Thanks mate this was a bloody good read. Had my cock as hard as hell,

Absolutely amazing!!! That was boiling hot

Awesome story loved all of it and the threesome at the end was perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hot story, but the month of fucking around behind his back urks me. Theres a girlfriend that is so sexually charged, but holds back? 5/5 till the end, 2/5. we'll hit the middle. 3.5 rounded up.

I suppose i forgot to send my first comment...

Anyway I think Lovedefacto's comment earlier is the correct one. I do not understand why people think sex with same gender isnt cheating.

I would have walked out as well.

I must admit tho that the story is very well written, and was heading towards 5 stars until the cheating got revealed.

Yourself and fuzzy pen are clearly the best authors on Lit.

You should publish stories or write screenplays for porn production sites…

Your stories on film would ba amazing!

As always, is there a part 2 in the works,,,?

Did your mother get knocked up by you got my mom and aunt sametime pregnant

one of the best stories i ever" read!!! loved it

I couldn't remember why this story bugged me, so I reread it. Crazy hot, but I really didn't like that his mom and his GF were actively cuckolding him for a month. Seemed like quite the betrayal, especially considering that it wasn't started with the intention of him joining. She just wanted to bang his mom, and his mom was fine with cucking her trusting, loving son. Then it occurred to them to throw him a bone. And the constant shots at his intelligence were a turn-off. But it was hot, unquestionably.

Nice plot twist loved it

Great story! I caught on to the setup pretty quick, but it was still awesome watching it unfold.

Hot story but please get an editor & fix those shocking typos & misused words.

It started out great but you lost me when the mom started to tell them what to do. Should have had the sin giving the orders instead of him cowardly backing off so much.

Really awesome story. I felt like I was there.

Excellent story and very well written. And one hell'ava imagination!

Yeah earin is most definitely a keeper any girl that doesn't mind playing those kind of games with her boyfriend then willing to have a threesom with him and his mom or any girl for that matter hell even I would keep her lol only thing I really disliked was how he was all cool with his girl fucking his mom for months behind his back I think you should have played that Part a little bit with him being upset for a day or 2 then led it into make up sex with the 3 that would have made it a lot hotter we all know make up sex is the best

That was fun. As an avid reader I sensed there was a plot twist coming. It was so well done it made it more enjoyable. Maybe now Sean has had his eyes opened he can be more assertive. Erin for sure is a keeper.

Have to agree he was most definitely nieve lol and would have to agree that girl did sound like a keeper

I didn't see that ending cumming 😁

Oh my, such a hot and loving story. Obvious that the girls were in together on it, but the story's great and kept the kicks coming. Gotto share this with the wife. She'll love it.

Would like to see further development. Would like t see the son grow a spine/pair.

Great job! I thought mom was laying a trap for the two of them, faking being hypnotized.

Didn't figure the women were in it together.

Thanks for sharing.

They treat him like a fool, and constantly talk down to him. I would dump Erin. She cheated on him for over a month, and thought there was nothing wrong with that. It's a deal breaker for me. She can't be trusted. If she thinks there is nothing wrong with fucking his mom behind his back, who else is she fucking when he is not looking? I'd show her the door, and the relationship with the mom would be on very thin ice.

Could have done without the cheating and the constant belittling, just felt a little... Over the top. Still a hot story but the ending was kind of meh for me.

Very HOT! Loved it! Best I’ve read here yet!

Started off interestingly, but descended into full-on stereotypical male porno. Good detail on the sexual choreography but a bit relentless.

Great reading, thanks,!

@lovedefacto

That would be horrible! That is not in line with the tone of the story before this at all. Honestly, that would take the 5-star story down to 1-star for me.

Not trying to be harsh, just honest.

I really like the dirty talk...

Excellent story! How about this for a different direction at the end!

Suddenly I sat down thinking about some weird thoughts! Erin looked at me and said, "What's wrong Sean?" I thought some more and said,

"So let me fully understand this. You walked in on my mother masturbating herself about a month ago, right?"

Erin "Yes, so?"

Me - "so how many times did you fuck her over the next month?"

Erin - "Oh about 10 to 12 times, why?"

Me - "Why? So you cheated on me, right? You had a full-blown affair without my knowledge, right?"

Erin (now getting a bit nervous - " Yes, but...".

Me - "But nothing. You cheated on me."

Carla - "But it was..."

Me - "What mom?" You betrayed me. Yes. You completely betrayed me with my girlfriend. The one that I thought was going to be my life partner!"

Carla - "Sean, don't get your shorts all twisted up!"

Me - "Don't get my shorts all twisted up? What if I fucked Erin's mother without her knowing about it? What would you call it? And don't give me any more of your smart mouth, mom."

Me - "Erin - I never believed that you would betray me. I thought that in you I found a lifetime partner."

Erin - "Sean, I didn't mean it like that. It wasn't really cheating. I planned on it to get your wish (she said this while crying)".

Me - "So, I enjoyed these trysts you had? I had orgasms each time you fucked each other?"

Carla - "Sean don't over-react!"

Me - Don't over-react? You mean I should ignore the fact that the two women who meant most to me in my life cheated on me and I should ignore it? Why, you were so hot to trot, you had to fuck my girlfriend?"

Carla - "Don't talk like that to me!"

Me - "Mom - shut the fuck up! The two of you CHEATED. You fucked each other's brains out and then you come up with this cock-a-mamie plan which would try to take my mind off the cheating and concentrate instead on fucking you, right?"

Carla - "Don't talk to me like that. If you don't like it, get out!"

Me - "Ah, so there it is. You want me out now, right? Covering up your cheating, right?" I got up and went upstairs to my room to pack.

Me - "Just remember - you are throwing me out. You will never see me again. Got it?"

I walk upstairs and Erin runs after me, crying. "Please Sean. Don't do this. I love you. I need you."

I get my suitcases down and start packing my clothes.

Me - "Right now, I'm not sure what to do with you. I will never be able to fully trust you again. Is it worth it to you to live like that? You are a cheater. You will never again be the same to me as you were just a few hours ago. You went behind my back a cheated, repeatedly." I continued packing and taking my computer apart along with my stereo.

Erin - "Sean, we can fix this. This really wasn't cheating" (sobbing).

Me - "Not cheating? If I fucked your sister or mother for a month would you call that cheating?" I start taking my stuff down to my truck. My mother just watched me as I went up and down repeatedly until I finally emptied my room. As I carried my last suitcase down through the living room Carla said -

"Where are you going?"

Me - "Why should you care? You threw me out! Now you can fuck like rabbits without any interference from me".

Erin - "Please Sean, I love you. Don't leave"

Me - "My mother threw me out. You two cheated and I get thrown out. Makes sense, right?"

Now Carla is crying along with Erin.

Erin screams "Sean, please. Don't go. I love you. Only you."

I get into the truck and pull away. Going to a cheap motel until I figure out what I want to do from here on out.

That was a hot story!!! So much fun with the kinky gf!

even if the end was predictable, it was an engaging read. it was dirty enough, and just the right length.

but, you do need to work on the grammar, the spellings, and the punctuations. perhaps, get an editing app, such as Grammarly.

i would have given this 5, but, those errors were off-putting.

cheers

So hot! Erin was the icing on the cum-covered cake!

Love this story but didn't care for the fact that Erin cheated on Sean with his mom before the three of them got together and that he didn't even bat an eye. It seems like it should to be addressed to me. But it could just be me, I am not really a fan of cheating. Great story! :)

great story. Love Erin

Hell yea! The sex was good and the story line was great. I figured it out when it started but it was still fucking hot.

this story was one of the best I have read here in a while. I so enjoyed the fantasy of a son being hot for his mom and his hot girlfriend helping to make it a reality. the part about the son putting his cock deep inside his mother for the first time and then driving it so far into her was the best part. I am so damn hard right now!

Every story of yours I read gets better and better thank you

Chalk that up for another 5! Great flow. Great action! And, for me, just the right length: long enough to be descriptive and short enough not to become boring. I wonder which story I'll read next? By the way, do either of these ladies have a strapon? Would make a great next chapter or another story altogether.

I agree with anonymous 11/15/19 it Was a great story until you had to go and ruin it by revealing the girlfriend and mother CHEATING and for a WHOLE MONTH!?! It WASN’T necessary! This wasn’t the only thing leaving me Disappointed for the FIRST time causing me to leave this story without voting again for the FIRST time it was also them making fun of him and Insulting him and him just sitting their Smiling as he eats Their Shit sandwich!! I KNOW it’s a Fictional story but cheating is NOT just a “hot button” for me it’s a Deal Breaker and NOTHING will turn me off faster!

Amazing story and fantasy. Hot mum, hot girlfriend, hot writing

I agree , having a Mom and girlfriend at the same time would be every son's dream.

Wow, what a great story. I would love to have a mother and girlfriend like that.

RAUNCHY GREAT!!!!!!

HC

I liked it until the end with the revelation that Erin had been cheating on him for a month with his mom. It seemed so unnecessary to the story arc and just leaves the reader wondering if she’ll cheat on him again in the future since she found it so easy to fool him once. Fictional character so it doesn’t really matter in the grand scheme of things, but the reader is led to believe women manipulate men at all times and the men, who are basically idiots, are helpless to prevent it. In the real world it’s countered all the time, resulting in women left alone and bitter when their deceptions aren’t tolerated.

One of the hottest stories ever!! Ditto about it being the ultimate dream - west of course

Every guys dream

Some of the hottest, sexiest porn lit that I've ever read.

One hell of a fantasy! Going to check out some more of your stories

So glad you included one of my fantasie. I love the idea of sucking a clit while my husband fucks another woman’s pussy, and stroking his dick with my tongue at the same time.

5 stars. loved the story.

But talk about being dense and pussy-whipped, Sean wins the gold star!

Hot hot hot

Couldn't keep my hand off my cock. Loved the story.

A really good hot hot story enjoyed it a lot while I stroked my cock!

Except for the syntax and spelling errors I would have given it a 5!

But you're still one of my favorite authors due to your good writing and story development!

Keep up the good work! ;=)

the mentor

I have 2 hot sister and a sexy MILFwho always made me hard when they were doing things like no bras or short shorts hot horny bisexual girlfriend wanted us to suduce them we roll played her as one of them eventually did fuck each one at a time then a family fuck fest and that:'s a story I'm working on now

So I saw the twist at the end coming part way through the story. The girlfriend was just too confident for it to be hypnosis. Still enjoyed the hell out of the story anyway.

I absolutely loved it. My wife and I use my mom and her mom as we fuck nearly all the time. As I fuck my wife she pretends to be her mom and my mom. What a sexy act that is in our bed. In fact, my wife pretended to be both moms as she jacke dme off one night.

loved the story line.

Love the story. I hope that there more coming with these three.

Loved the wrink!les and turns and the in and outs of the story!

Moms and sons with dads. great 3 somes

I have to report this as the best story ever!!! What a great story. Thank you

Jus awesome!!!

One of the best written Threesomes I've ever read.

Most of the time I really prefer a lot of build up, but you aced this one with very minimal build up. The tension during the long sex scene was the build up.

I liked the twist at the end. Keep writing.

This is the hottest three-way story I've ever read and the easiest one I've ever read as well. So many times I wish this could have happened with me and my mom with one of my girlfriends. Very hot story giving it 5 stars and saving it too.

That was one of the best and hottest stories I have EVER read.

Pigs don't sweat much, so they wallow in the mud to cool off their bodies. So how did the English language expression "sweating like a pig" develop? It's actually a reference to pig iron, which is form of iron smelting:

When pig iron is originally created from iron ore, the smelter needs to heat the ore to extreme temperatures, and then move the liquid metal into the mold. Until the liquid cools, it can't be safely moved, as the extremely hot metal is liable to spill, burning whatever it comes in contact with.

How does the smelter know when the metal is cool enough to transport? When the "pigs" "sweat." As the metal cools, the air around it reaches the dew point, causing droplets to form on the metal's surface.