All Comments on 'And She's Only 18!'

This should be in incest/taboo. I did not enjoy it.

If this story had gone into more detail between Andrews and the girl and left out all the attention paid to the Incest/Taboo part of the story, then I probably would have given it a higher score. But as it was, you seemed to put some serious detail into the family sex part and zipped through Alta and Mr. Andrews, which was the only reason I wanted to read it to start with. I was disappointed that I clicked on a story for "Mature" and all I really got was Incest. If you considered a rewrite and put more details into Alta and Mr. Andrews encounter and left out the focus on the Incest, I'll surely read it.