by Harpy18
This was not a good story. This seemed so rushed that it gives me the impression that you wrote it hammering on your 2in cock after you tightened the belt you got 3 Christmases ago around your neck.
Awsum, need an encore, nice job for a first story, may you post another soon plz
nicely done...pay no attention to the anonymous trolls. Please continue...
This while seeming rushed holds a lot of potential. I hope to read more soon.