All Comments on 'Andy Saves the Burks Pt. 03'

What a wonderful and incredible fantasy. I enjoyed the story very much! It was well-written and well organized. Cannot wait for more episodes

As a strictly sexual story this is working well. I'm still not sure what Ron and Stephen have to do with the story as they are stealing Don and Tony's good times.

What do the Conners get from all of this?

IJS0904, you've got lots of 'splaineen' to do. More parts please.

Excellent story but who the fuck is janet. Page 2

You need to edit the names in this part. Lots of mistakes and new names suddenly appear which stop the flow of the story

Sorry but I couldn't follow the names ... you shoul dgive this story a thorough review to edit it.

Is it Ron or Don? Rob or Bob? (The latter I could excuse if anyone had called Bob Rob even once in this series. They didn't.

All considered, mediocre . . . .