All Comments on 'Angela's Adventures Ch. 01'

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoalmost 14 years ago
This is pretty wicked US.

Goodness me, maybe you should tie in something about lesbian nuns next time lol. Good imagery, I never read hetero, or horror, but I liked it. Gotta a little scared at the end. Where is my sugar momma?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Oh, nice!

Very nice story, well told with a sharp ending.

D_K_MoonD_K_Moonalmost 14 years ago
Interesting Start

It's an interesting start, I would have liked to see a bit of a tie in for the second chapter, something to make the readers want to come back and read some more.

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I read a f*ck ton of fanfiction these days, I still write, but mostly of that nature so not on here. (Usually against the submission guidelines in other ways as well!) If you want to chat I'm always up for it, if I remember to answer!

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