All Comments on 'Angelic Treasures - Welcome Home'

An incredibly long build-up to an awesome sex scene. It breaks up a family, it causes Ashley to lose her innocence and her self-worth. It's a Titanic of a father who would take his son's girlfriend. Brilliantly written. I intend to read more of your writings when they come out.

Incredible.

Well written. Intoxicating.

Real.

The treatment of consequences is unique.

Found it to have a very long build up causing me to skim over a large portion, but still had its good points. 4 stars, lost one for length.