All Comments on 'Angelica Angelina Pt. 03'

Now I have to start at top and read them all.

I am working on a couple of stories myself and could use some advise.

Hope you take the time to get back.

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Yeah, I need to look into your other stories. But you really need to continue this series.

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I love the story line. I do also wish for more chapters. May God have mercy on all of us for we are all damned. If only sinning was this tasty!

Attention to details was beautiful in the description of each touch for the first time. Author captured the thoughts and feelings of sexually innocent people when they begin to explore their desires.

Another story would be wellcome

A great story thus far, and it could possibly end here, if not for the fact that there are some unfinished story lines.

Mum hasn't explored all of her desires yet. Dad hasn't explored a lot of things. How far will the girls go with Kirk? Does Rita get involved? Do the other Church wives get a see in? How does college change the dynamic?

Too many unanswered plots to shut this down just yet.