All Comments on 'Angeline Ch. 03'

This was a good story. Although there was a slight error in the plot. In Ch. 2, you said the child would reach maturity in 3 years and be queen in 4. Then in Ch. 3, it was 6 years to maturity and 7 years to be Queen.

You really should write another chapter for this.

Great first fe chapters, can't wait for more!