All Comments on 'Angel's Call Ch. 05-06'

She has nothing and still can not trust any man...

He is ready to help but all his gestures are open

to misinterpretation. I wonder if he will be permitted to or have to do diaper duty.

how the story is developing. She's just been through a traumatic experience and has trust issues. Thanks for the longer submission. Keep writing and hope you update soon!

The pace seems slightly slow but the drama is building nicely. T he problem is how to convince us that an unhappy

ending is possible. Worst yet though would be an unbelievable happy ending.

Chris has done so much for Anna and her baby. Now he's helping them with their house and wants nothing in return. He seems too good to be true. I would be suspicious too hehe. Thanks for posting two chapters!