All Comments on 'Angels Ch. 01-02'

This does have me curious. I am wondering what is happening here exactly.

i take it she has dreamt of him for a while...i think you should have put some of that in so that we knew what she'd dreamt about him....then go into it being real. There are still some mistakes... a wrong word here or there so just re-read it an extra time maybe. I like the first chapter and hope the next will be longer. What are the black angels that hurt her? looking forward to the rest.