by homerdepot
Great story. The only criticism is that it stopped suddenly at the end.
It is your storyline. Tell it like you feel like. But a another chapter would be nice. I really enjoyed it so far.
Beth needs her pussy pounded so hard by Danny that she'll walk with a limp the next day.
This story needs an ending, well done
but what happend next. Keep it going.
..THANKS..
USAF
Good story but I had to laugh when you wrote 'Greasy entrance of her passy mouth' that cracked me up. Damn, you gotta way with words! 5 BIG FAT STARS! Of course a Thanks also.