All Comments on 'Animal House'

To write about 4 people fucking has been done by endless line of writers. The sex description is OK, but when a story complete lack a story line, it has no value for me.

Value? On a free Lit site? Don't dispair from the few who feel they are owed something. Just keep writing, and let the "value" be that you shared a story.

Do we really need another poorly written story about people fucking that adds absolutely nothing new or different to the genre? I vote no. It's a waste of electrons.

A bit dreamy......No one got knocked up and you did not stay in contact with each other?

All the emotional depth, style and tediousness of a police report.