All Comments on 'Anitole's Red Riding Hood'

be careful of the typos. they detract from your otherwise well written and very hot story.

That was a rather abrupt and awkward place to end. A whole lot wasn't explained. Unless this is chapter 1 which it should have been labeled as. A TBC or THE END would have been helpful. I like the story a lot but have no idea what happed with the ending.

A good story, but the ending was too sudden and incomplete.

WHAT THE HELL? THE MAIN GIRL IN THE STORY FUCKING IS 15? THAT WAS THE FIRST THING I SAW WHEN I READ THIS AND FELT CONFUSION.WHY WOULD MAKE A STORY WHERE THE GIRL IS 15 AND FUCKING THE BIG BAD WOLF. PLEASE CORRECT THIS OR ANWSER ME ABOUT THIS.

"By the age of 19 she had grown quite beautiful." i agree, your ending just sort of happened. also, is this a repost? i feel like i've read this already?

She is 19 at the age of intercourse. There will be subsequent chapters if enough interest is shown to warrent my continuing the story. You've red an eroticized red riding hood story before? NO SHIT! Freud and Jung analyzed it all to death and many versions have been told.

Incest, rape, bestiality, cannibalism and other things have been played up in different versions.

It's not unheard of for authors to put their own twists on fairy tales. After all King Lear is just Cinderella with some changes and better poetry. Romeo and Juliet is a revamping of Pyrimus and Thisbe as is off broadway show The Fantastiks.

Please continue the story, the end was too abrupt. Having problems to vote, but I would give u a 5 if I could

Amazing dialog! I was captivated!

After so long working to get this story just right, I've finally finished it. I am attempting to have it published in ebook format. As soon as I have news, I'll share. Thank you for reading.

XOXO Anitole

SHES 15 DIS IS GONNA BE REPORTED

She 15 at the start but any sex occurs when she 19.