All Comments on 'Anklet Adventure Pt. 04'

1*

and repetitive. Their story needed no more than half what you wrote. My ratings went from 5 stars for chap 1 (I'm a sucker for bisexual cuckold stories!) to 3 for chap 2 and downhill from there.

From the start, it was bullshit. The “proud father of a black baby”? Why is he proud? He’s done nothing to donate his DNA and he certainly had nothing to do with birthing it, so why is he proud? Regardless of whether he is there or not, the baby has absolutely NOTHING to do with him. May as well say he’s the proud nanny to the baby.

And why does he call himself the father? What can he teach it? How to be a wimp? How to be so wrapped up in a layer of bullshit, he can’t see the real world.

That first sentence told me everything about this story: namely that it’s racist bullshit.

I thought the story so far has been pretty interesting! I would like to hear more about Carla though, and when Ed is dressed up as a sissy does he get a feminine name?

A lot of the comment are just hanging on the genre. Keep up the good work, I curious to see where this is going! Maybe cock freedom day is not gonna be as pleasant as they think :)

I would love to be one of the women but as I am a sissy I will be one of the sissies and relish whatever cum they feed to me.

I would love to be a young girl and get black bred letting the blackman fuck my3 holes and making me his willing bitch and whore

can't wait to see the next one

I liked the other chapters but it is getting a bit silly now. Pj57GG

I enjoyed the previous chapters, but this one went so far out there that I lost all interest.

Incredible sissy story 😘

Whilst reading this.

It's time to divorce this sick bitch. You lost me here.

Your character in this story must be the most stupid 'man', of any story on here.

No build up, no character arc and the characters just became more and more unbelievable as the story went on. By the 2nd installment was just skimming.

“Sometimes you dig a hole just to see what’s at the bottom.” - Rachael Ross

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Now I know what she meant. Interesting. Thank you.

I can’t believe how Fucked up this family had become. Lynda is a true Bitch for letting her own become so Perverted. They all are guilty of a BBC fetish and to stoop to selling their bodies to a Drug Lord.

Well…that was a fucked up story even for me. But then I still read it right to the end. So I give it a very entertaining story review.

First story was OK, second smells bad, third really stink, but part 4.... better You newer wrote. You not have immagination, story was not credibile (try to SF zone, ori for dumb people zone). Man, the husband want to see his wife fucked, and accept to stay at bar? If You folow your personage whishes You wrote an better story.

There have been 64,299 views of this story and 95 people elected to favorite the story, 64,204 did not! That tells you something.

The score is unreasonably high for such a terrible story. I understand that some would find this arousing and that's fair - I make no judgement on personal kink, BUT . . .

This just abusive, the mother character is a sociopath, and the author gave no warning of that.

I have never give a story one * bur here it is:

1*

Couldn't stop reading. Love the story of their journey to sexual heaven.

Too much faggot sisdy boi shit!!!

buy a gun, in america it is easy, and then stand up for you rights. Make Lynda unlock husband and son and then throw them out of the house(the women i mean_)