All Comments on 'Ann'

You need to compare your story with others and see how your descriptions stack up to other authors if you want to improve and continue to write. Ask a women to read your physical descriptions of the three women and get her opinion on how to improve them. None sounded believable to me.

Have you any reason why Ann decided to go along with her friends? Doesn't it seem out of character?

I just can't see where it would be a turn on for him to have his wife go out and fuck some other guy while he is setting home alone pissed off that his wife didn't even tell him where she was going.

To top it off she comes home and tells him she has fucked a strange guy and let him cum in her.

Now I can see where it could be fun if he was with her and doing the double plug on her, a MFM threesome, at least he would have had something to do while she was getting herself fucked.

As I said before, the story was written well it's just the storyline wasn't believable to me.

Just another sorry slut wife story with a sorry wimp husband.

Sorry, but geeze, the guys wife comes home, tells him she has cheated on him, and he just lays there and says nothing. Just not reasonable, hey even if they wanted an open marriage, she cheated without discussing it with him....only redeeming thing is that she didn't lie about anything (well, maybe not), but come on the story line needs some real work to make these characters believable.

Another loser and the story starts with his loving wife going to his car, being abrupt, talking down to him as though he was just so much dirt and that he should just go, she had plans...what plans? Hello - Loving?

Too bad they don't have a section for wimp/loser stories, this guy is not a man - he's a joke!

I can't bring myself to give it one star. This is some sick-assed disgusting CRAP! Do us a favor and stop with this one.

You are married to an idiot that for being drunk placed herself and then intentionally you in harms way by having bareback sex with someone outside the marriage without your knowledge or consent. You should have shoved her off you, put in for a divorce, and sued her for intentionally attemting to physically harm you by her actions. That you didnt discuss medical testing nor did the above mentioned things speaks more to your stupidity than to hers. She is a selfish, self centered, cunt, you, however, are an idiot.

She just happens to go out with two grilfriends and just happens to go to a guys hotel and just happens to have sex with him and her husband is fine with it? No wonder she cheated on him because he is a fucking loser.

What a turn off, your husband comes close to a new low in men, thanks for that.

I love it when these posts ring of reality! Thanks for sharing this very sexy post! :)

Pay no attention to these "moralistic jerks"

The story was fun, and if halfway true, you are very lucky

Comment written by a lesbo, gee, no wonder the thought of a brain dead wimp cockold turns her on. I guess sexual perversion should be expected, but their should be a dump all catagory called "little dicked cockold wimps and the people who love them".

immature, juvenile, sad limp-dicked fucking pin-head in the history of denial? WHY ARE YOU HERE???

Who let their wives put them down, fuck with their heads, disrespect them, cheat on them, then just lay in bed like a little kid. W.T.F. kind of idiot thinks this is erotic, not a man.

Fun reading and fuel for fantasy sex in the future. Why do people read this genre of story and write such terrible reviews. Read something else.

Nice

It sucked!

Written by demented "writer" ! It looks like the "boston" come out of the same mental asylum as the writer !

HONEY it;s ok just so you don't go out and fuck some one else. I will try and not think abouut the AIDS that you mught have brought me home with your cheating

there are so many WACC writers here that this section needs to be changed to cuckold lovers

he got fired from a blow-job

I hate cucks and I hate cheating wives. Lousy fucking story. Waste of time reading.

poorly told story.

Unrealistic crap. just another jerk off fantasy for the scum.

Although you could have developed the story a little better it was good...if you are into this kind of stuff.

Really? He didn't want her to cheat, just wanted her to "loosen up in the subject of sex"!!! And he also said: "I had never really wanted her to have sex with someone else..."!! Then out of character she cheats and he easily accepts that...Sure she didn't hide it or lie to him about it, but she did cheat...And cheating means no respect...Accepting cheating easy, also means no self-respect...1*

She went to the driver side of the car and didn't speak softly as a wife that had to work late, she talked down to him and told him she had plans - not work! That shows contempt and disrespect!

Now, staying with the intent of the writer, she was probably just working over although, that didn't come across as a normal activity so...

She doesn't explain anything, just go home, I'll get home later and off she goes with no love or kiss...some warmth in this marriage.

Now, as a reader of the story, real life possibility is that she isn't still lovey dovey with hubby but married and doing just every day normal living and working, no great emotions. Her conduct at the car shows disrespect and contempt by virtue of her matter of fact dismissing him. Her going to the bar with the girls at a late hour didn't seem to bother or matter to her at all, in fact, she doesn't even call hubby to tell him she's leaving the office for drinks and be home shortly, NO, she just goes and does whatever she pleases and that includes getting down to her underwear and watching a movie with the girls at a bachelor pad, certainly no concern for self respect, respect for her marriage or thoughts about her reputation...hell no, just going with the flow.

Now she fucks the guy, willingly and wantingly, goes home and tells hubby while she fucks him and then matter of fact says that it is not something she calmly decides will happen again - Sure?

Interesting story but this girl thought more about extra marital sex than she let hubby know. Hubby encouraged it and she liked it and will do it again. Was it difficult for her - NO, her talking down to him in the parking lot shows that she isn't the least bit concerned with his opinion, feelings or fidelity...some marriage.

Well, thanks for the read, different story line but, as you can read, I think we have a Hot wife, like it or not and she can take or leave hubby with not much emotion!

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She is serial cheater lost college instructor job in Helena Montana for coercing student into sex. Husband is panty sniffer and wife made sure to have cum-filled ones waiting for him every Friday night for close to a year

From your story you and he would be bff

didn't give her husband an STD. She'll never do it again? YEAH right!

But each time I told her a fantasy I told her fantasies are only dreamlike in nature. They are never intended to be real. Then I would tell her I have fantasized about robbing a bank but I certainly don't want to actually live that fantasy for real. She began to tell me some of her fantasies such as having sex with a stranger, then coming home to me. A short time later after a great night of sex with her, I stopped in at my favorite bar, and my favorite waitress came over to my booth and told me that my wife had left with a well-known pussy hound the night before. The guy came back and bragged about having nailed the girl he left with. He seemed pleased that he helped make one of her fantasies come true. I divorced her before she completed her gangbang fantasy.

We all lucky this fool stopped at one story

What ugly and complete waste of time reading this garbage.

The writer must be a freaking retard to write something so stupid, nonsense wimp and brainless like this horrible story.

1* for this lame.

Divorce the bitch

Have a guy fuck you so you know what you are.

That is a hot fucking story

If he believes Ann's protestations that she will never do this again, he is self-delusional. His pride is destined to take a fatal hit.

This pathetic little boy is a cuck. This nonsense never ends.

I found very little in this story that I Liked .. Mess with My Wife and I will Not Be Happy at all ..

So from conservative to a party slut in a couple of hours? Instead of taking so much in describing the wife and her friends, this author could have led her in to her night of fun. It was just rushed at the ending, which should have been at least half the story.

Scdan- Can’t say I found anything remotely interesting in this story. One star, and I was being generous.

your wifes a nasty whore.,and you is a cocksucking wimp.

a whore and her minion

I, for one, LOVED this story.

ROFLMAO the closet crowd would love this laughably bad pile of horse excrement.

Perhaps aiming at sucking as a writer shouldnt have been your goal.

This is as good a story as I have read in a while, on Lit. Keep on getting better. 1 * on this, damn good writing.