by Amber_Embers
Beautiful erotic story. Well written and descriptive. Thank you so much for sharing. Look forward to reading more of your work. Not too long I hope!!
Sweet and concise. Thoroughly enjoyed it, and am looking forward to more works.
Absolutely loved this one. It was more than just sex; it was passion and build up and then the really explicit hot sex. I can tell the way you write you were wishing this was you and after reading it, I was wishing it was me.
Amber, all I can see if very good work, nice length, good build, love the attention to detail and the descriptors hopefully there is more to come from you :)
Loved this! So sensual, yet so sexy, their connections really comes across, they make a great couple, love to hear more. D x