All Comments on 'Anna Ch. 01'

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RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Great start!

You've opened up a myriad of possibilities. Let's have another chapter soon!

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12over 15 years ago
Anna

Really good start! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
whoa

You could stop RIGHT HERE as far as I'm concerned. Very hot and beautifully written. I'll be reading this one again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Reluctant? He hid it well

Or was Anna reluctant? I thought this was sexy and intelligently written, just curious why you posted in this cat. I hope you plan to follow up after this first story. A couple of minor typos only stood out because in general this is well written. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Keep up the good work

Great story

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