All Comments on 'Anna Ch. 01'

Great story

Or was Anna reluctant? I thought this was sexy and intelligently written, just curious why you posted in this cat. I hope you plan to follow up after this first story. A couple of minor typos only stood out because in general this is well written. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC.

You could stop RIGHT HERE as far as I'm concerned. Very hot and beautifully written. I'll be reading this one again.

Really good start! Hope to see the next chapter soon!

You've opened up a myriad of possibilities. Let's have another chapter soon!