All Comments on 'Anna Ch. 02'

Well written and Anna's character development at the beginning we was well thought out and imaginative. It reminded me of Anais Nin and some of her character writings.

The only suggestions I would make; make the story longer...you built a great foundation...make it last a little longer :)

Also, there are a few minor spelling and grammatical items that can easily be solved with a proof-reader.

Overall, excellent writing, storyline and imaginative prose.

Well done! :)