All Comments on 'Annabelle'

w t f did I just read? Truly fucked up characters, top to bottom.

As an older woman who enjoys an exciting erotic tale I was disappointed. First though she may have been older, you never described the mature portion. Second, if she truly was mature as you infer she would not have been what you described as "wet". It just doesn't happen that way honey, when the estrogen levels drop, so do the natural lubricants. A word to the wise, if you do another such tale make sure to put it where it belongs, in LW or fetish. I would have liked to score it with a 4, but in the end it wasn't worth more than a 2.

Seems a realistic portrayal of people involved in this type of lifestyle, completely selfish and fucked up.

Loved the PS.

***Thanks for the read.

Loads of words but just so empty not a good read

Think Clive has enough money to get max hurt

Best written story I’ve read on Literotica. Worthy of being published anywhere or anthologies!

Yeah, if I were Max, I would hire some good security, and start wearing a vest. Maybe, learn how to handle and shoot a hand gun properly. The security company most likely has people that can do this. Now hand guns are illegal in England, but surely there is a way to get a permit. I hate people that use anonymous as a way of bad-mouthing a writer without cause. It was a good read, and I encourage you to either add more chapters to this piece or call it finished and move on to your next story. Good work. Keep writing.

XYZ

Good erotic story

Please write more.

Excellent erotic story. Lot of thought went into it. Very creative writing