by TonyMA70
Why did this story have me googling PlayGYN? You know why, its HOT and I will be looking for more in the future.
Wonderful, believable and of course, HOTT!!!
I knew by the title of your story this would be very arousing and after reading it I'm not disappointed. Waiting for another chapter.
I loved this story (five stars) despite the appalling grammar and syntax errors.
I would very much like to read the next chapter, so please continue this great story.
Hot...Butt...
Good story - erotic and good theme. As others have pointed out, the bad grammar and syntax detract from the story.
This story had great potential but was so poorly written it flopped horribly.