All Comments on 'Annie's Weekend of Discovery Ch. 03'

Just womdering. Seems to me wifey has all the fun. Where is the man who is supposed to be married to her? Can you spell afterthought? Divorce? What happened to him?

Really? How sad. I read some of the comments earlier and thought they we're constructive and not demeaning in any way. I hate to spring this on you but the fact you have not mentioned the husband in the last two chapters IS a problem. The story makes no sense. Just people humping their brains out. Boring actually.Well, That's my rant and you can delete this a well. I will not read you again although I thought the story had potential Good Luck

You barely manage a 2 but it will get better if you keep trying.

To all the anonymous critics: Feel free to leave comments, but I will pay far more attention to your critiques if you leave your name and let me read some of YOUR writing. Show my what YOU can do before you tell me my writing sucks. It's far easier to tell someone else what they're doing wrong than do better yourselves.

Annie hasn't seemed to have had a thought about her missing husband....it has all been about Tom and Michael....seems as if there marriage is toast!

Besides being a worthless cockold, husband is not even thought about or in the story, wife is a degenerate slut who would fuck anybody, anytime. If you think straight married guys find this erotic, you are a idiot. You may have worked hard but this story sucks, no plot, no love, no marriage, just dogs fucking in the yard.

So what you are saying is the only people who should comment are those who write stories? Really? Good Luck with that. One last comment Sems to me that with the comments I have read here there is an ongoing theme. Where the fuck is the husband?. Might as well put this in Erotic Couplings because as you know the husband has all but disappeared in the last two chapters. I guess you might as well turn off the comments on all your stories

When the two "friends" leave they will have to throw her out of their car cause she will want to leave with them, best sex of her life, much better than little dick can do, so was hubbie just trying to get rid of her? If so he did a great job.

I'm saying that it's far easier to criticize people for something than to do a good job of it yourself. If you're such an expert, let me read something you've written. Let me learn from your obvious expertise. I'll read feedback, but won't give you any credence if you won't even give your name and let me read your work.

You ask about the husband. In the first chapter, it explains where he is. My intent was to have him come back into the picture after his business trip.

You're right. I should have kept that part of the story going. Thanks for the suggestion.

Hopefully you are not allowed around children, bitch.

Happy whore, happy cuck. Happy horseshit.

What a wonderful husband, encouraging his wife to have a fantasy weekend but making sure to her and his friends that she chooses the limits. It would be great to read about the homecoming sex with hubby as she shares her weekend with his friends. A fifth chapter on their new swinging advenures would be a bonus.