All Comments on 'Anniversary'

Maybe, just maybe, you had a decent idea for the start of a story. But that's all this is - a start. WAY too little information to begin with. And no ending whatsoever. This is more like an outline for a complete story. It lacks anything clever, interesting or entertaining to be any good.

... but not really enough to stand as a story. You write well enough but your readers need more - a lot more. Please continue, and don't tease us as much as she is teasing him! Four stars and thank you for posting.

It's a bit missing the details.