by CreoleLover
Loved the interplay between the couple. Especially loved the creampie scene. Nothing beats the taste of a good creampie.
A nice, HOT date and story. Some spelling and writing errors (twice/repeated sentence).
And a couple of 'missed opportunities' - room for some pee play in the bathroom, and some anal play (rimming and/or penetration) while in bed. They've been together long enough to have desired or tried these.