by GrantBricksly
Fantastic, a bit surreal with the "clock", but sexy action and amazing descriptions of the many interactions.
5 stars +++++. Still shaking. Well written, hot as heck. Hope you continue this story with additional chapters. Almost felt as if I was there. I'm almost 80, so the days of multiple partners are behind me, but the wife and I still make each other smile. So, I don't have to "handle things" myself after (or during) the reading.
Have to say it again, damn you are good.
Got about halfway through the clock one before it was swapped out. Hopefully that will be reposted at some point.
This one is very good and gives backstory to the characters that was alluded to.
Every man’s fantasy, but Grant needs more freedom with Sara. Good for the goose…
The Daddy/Baby trope distracted from the theme. After showing him the first lace outfit, she should have gone back behind the curtain and let S then pop out. Why didn’t she want him to do PIV with S? Watching them go to town and only jerking off for three times at the end seemed unfair. Better than jerking off to this story, I guess, but he should have still been a participant.
Good story but boring. Everything is good, good, good. Where is the conflict? Even hallmark movies have some conflict. It adds growth and purchase into the characters love or hate but its the change that drives the story.