All Comments on 'Another Anniversary Dance'

But it sure wasn't hearts and flowers. I described another story, by another author, that was also well-written as "depressing". I would describe this story as "grim". Ugly, nasty, stupid people doing some really cruel things. Let's face it - John wasn't any prize himself. Although he gets a divorce and is awarded some money, his future doesn't appear to be a rosy one. What woman, upon finding out his background, would consent to marrying him? Not a pretty picture.

3 stars

I don't know why all these authors continue to develop as ridiculous stupid promise of the insanely jealous wife who decides to tie up torture and rape her husband because she thinks something has happened. These stories are a joke. They don't work. They are Not realistic and they are not well written and it doesn't matter whose author is. You cannot shine up a large turds and call it a piece of China. These stories don't work

Too unbelievable.

Her not recognising yhe sister and her change from super agressive to being oh so sorry was far too unrealistic.

Not one of your better efforts.

That is one fucked up woman.

Back in March 2019, I published a story called "The Anniversary Dance," about a young, sexually repressed wife who turned to stripping as a way to help her open up to her husband.

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I remember that one - nothing like stealing all those new experiences from your husband and rubbing your naked body on dozens of men including your own cousin to make life better for the man you denied all those memories to

MAGAat... How do you think you are able to read about rapists here without it?

Good story, a little over the top but the only thing missing was for him to have a meeting before she was sent to prison and here what she had to say. From the story she seemed to know these men from before? so was she cheating on him before, seems she’d had sex with them before, or were these guys some old gang she used to hang with? it isn’t;t explained clearly, from my reading, maybe I missed something. But overall she deserved what she got.

Started well but drifted away at the end. Characters were one dimensional, no believable interaction between husband and wife.

Sorry but it was an unsatisfactory story.

Just 2**

Another beauty, ST! Gees you sure know the right way to put a hell of a tale together. You are able to maintain a high standard throughout all of your submissions. And Lord knows, we could all do with some genuine entertainment these days. Keep 'em comin' chief!

I have gotten so angry that it causes me to blackout. The adrenaline apparently gives me extra strength. Luckily, I snap out of it quickly. It has happened three or four times. I try my best not to get that angry.

An awesome story, the vindictive bitch, soon to be ex-wife deserves everything thrown at her including a lesbian cell mate for her hot times in prison.

good one write one where max gets involved

But you are dead wrong about section 230. Without it, we wouldn't be able to make comments here.

https://www.techdirt.com/articles/20200531/23325444617/hello-youve-been-referred-here-because-youre-wrong-about-section-230-communications-decency-act.shtml

Answer: Yes, that condition exist, at least in some people!

Some years back I was reading about young boy lifting quarter of the car when his dad got crashed under it.

Old grandmother ripped car door off to save her granddaughter after accident.

I won't bore you, but cases go on.... Yes it is there, and is called Qi, or Prana, or...

it has many names depending from where it comes from.

Again, Very good story!

A tad extreme and unbelievable at times but well written, as usual. Thanks for all your stories for the year. Cheers.

You telegraphed the entire story by the middle of the 1st page.

As usual very good *5* stars and and thanks for writing! .

story S.T. . Another author wrote" the writer is asking the reader to set aside believability" I agree with that and as you always say" it's fiction". Keep on

sending em.

Thank you for another great Saddletramp story, look forward to the next.

Scores 5/5

ST said at the outset that the story was intended to be unrealistic, and he was certainly correct.

One question though -- why didn't John immediately say "It was my sister" rather than "it isn't what it seems like"? That might have made the story more challenging and interesting.

I do appreciate the end note, which is helpful and does show that ST did some research about reality before going unrealistic.

I enjoyed the story. I share the opinion John should have quickly blurted, "She's my sister." Then let them go forward maybe saying "I don't believe you' or "It is too late to stop now."

So Donna goes from a loving but jealous wife to a gang banging slut who kidnaps and humiliates her husband. Back to a contrite sorrowful wife in an instant. What garbage,

You show talent as a writer but it appears you have some serious issues you’re dealing with. Hope you’re getting help with that. Scariest thing to me is there are a lot of people who feed into this.

Unbelievable even by SaddleTramp standards. Even without reading the report. she doesn't recognize his sister?!

Just guessing. But the loss of memory. Lack of pain. Above average strength. Classic berserker.

"Worse yet, internet laws like Section 230 of the Communications Decency Act provide loopholes that allow so-called "interactive computer services" to escape responsibility."

As somebody that has been on the internet since '98 and built one of the first internet businesses, I can tell you flat out that without 230, the internet would have been stillborn. A site like Literotica would need a team of lawyers parsing every story for legal issues. Comments wouldn't exist. Readers and authors would have to pay a fee for it to stay in business.

While the internet does get rough at times, it's the lack of action by our politicians that is at fault, not 230.

For a guy that gets to publish stories without censorship, your ignorance is astonishing.

I know this is a story created within the boundaries of your mind and fed to your computer via your fingers, it is however a bit off the track of reality.

Deep, dark and a disturbing 5* story

Kinda fizzled out at the end

For all we know he ends up happily remarried or a vigilante serial killer

Improbable? Yes. But it was fun. While the revenge scenario may be unrealistic, there are psycho wives out there (and more than a few psycho husbands) and the harm they cause is tremendous. What I would not do to have super-human strength on a few rare occasions!

It sounds like a berserker kind of condition. Thanks for the entertainment!

Good Sunday morning unreality read!

Thanks

However:

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“He has the video," John said. "As far as I know, it never got to the Internet."

"But it would have gotten to the web," she said.

"Oh yes," he told her. She nodded her head.

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Uh....the Internet and the Web are the same thing :)

Sadly after filling the parents in they became the stereotypical LW's parents with the statement

""You can't be serious," Marsha said. "Look, I know you're probably upset but surely you can understand how she would feel. What would you do if you saw a picture of her eating lunch with a man?"

C'mon.

total waist for negative score. LOVE slap hapy papy #9

Everything past that point was stupid.

I've read all your LW stories and you really jumped into the fray early in this one. The general plot does seem similar to another one I've read, but still pretty intense stuff. However, after the initial incident, the story seems to lack cohesiveness and plods along to its conclusion...with a whimper. Not your best outing but still worth 4*. If we don't hear from you before the holidays, Merry Christmas and thanks for the entertainment in 2020!

Great story, as usual. Thanks!

Not one of your best.

I'm all for retribution, but this was just so unbelievable.

She spent hours reading revenge sites, but not 30 seconds on the pi report. Come on, that's stretching credibility even for you.

An entertaining read, full of testosterone and an “equaliser” slant. I appreciated the author’s final comments as a re-entry to the real world.

Seriously, there are a few stories on here where the wife forces the husband to watch her having sex with others. But I don't believe it has ever actually happened in real life. I wonder where this comes from.

You are the SHIT Mr. Tramp!!!!

Makes my day when I see you've posted a new one!

Keep up the excellent work brother!!!!

Thanks for brightening up my Sunday with a little fantasy. I see some other commentators still don't get it but hey you can't please all the readers all of the time...or in Harryin VA's case neither you or any author on this site can please him ever. Good work, thank you.

and somewhat disconnected from reality, maybe the reference to John's m-a-r-i-t-a-l arts training was contextually accurate, instead of being a typo as I had assumed.

Cant get into the ones with the ghosts and otherworldly stuff. If a little superhuman strength while under duress is it, I can take it. Kind of how you wrote in the beginning.

Thanks for this!

Fun read. It's good to suspend some reality from time to time. Keep it up!

This story was lacking a finale, the remorse and breaking down of the wife that should have happened. She should have found out about the party that he planned and the necklace which would have made her even more despondent. She deserved so much more pain

.. you will win any prize with this story but I finished and I will give you *****

Well done I liked it 5 stars

Different take on the suspicious wife theme. There is no specific condition as named in the story as far as I know, but people can go into a state where they do extraordinary things, like lifting a car up when someone gets trapped or the like, it also can happen w drugs like PCP where they get enraged and can do incredible things,though they usually do major damage to the body. To take things this far the wife had to be nuts herself, she was sort of analagous to the husband if she never even read the report ( though why she didn't recognize the sister IDK, even after 5 years unless she radically had changed she would have had to see pictures of her. Might have worked better if husband and sister had had a falling out and she never saw the sister).

The rest is over the top but of course this is the Saddletramp universe, we know that. The wife had to be pretty stupid if she was planning on getting knocked up, she said hubby was dead to her,but more importantly, a DNA test would show the kid wasn't his so he wouldn't have to do anything, the bikers couldn't prevent that one from happening unless they planned in killing him.

The ending was just okay, unlike his other stories where the cheating wife pays the price via Justice O Peace or whatnot, we never find out why she was that crazy and jealous, and he never really gets closure of knowing his wife was crazy, not like most women.

How can anyone give this stupid shit anymore than a 2 or 3? It's ridiculous.

Good story!

5

after all, there are psycho people out there, and some of them are women. What I've never understood is why there are psycho Wives out there. What kind of man is that stupid or negligent in choosing a wife? I can tell you, its the type of man who yells, "Its not what it looks like," instead of "Its a picture of me having dinner with my sister, what's wrong with that?"

But that would ruin the plot. It would not have ruined much.

It would have been a silly cartoon if it was not so sad and tragic. His wife needs help with her mental illness, not prison. If she were that evil and cruel then he married a monster, and got what he married. Serves him right.

Gross, but thanks for the effort, I guess.

Hulk smash! But seriously, it was a great little break from reality. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

This was truly an awesome story. Thank you so much.

More saddletramp, everyday. These stories are too short and too entertaining. It's great to be able to lose yourself in a good story. It's fun to get pissed , but too be certain that the good guy will win in the end. Saddletramp is one great asset to LW readers.

Meet Cuckold Hulk Ray! You really wouldn’t want him angry. Very amusing story. 5 Stars.

details--he became upset thinking about his, so why not have her parents clean out her things. The cops would have taken her car to look for evidence. With her jealousy ,why not get her some help earlier--he would be aware of his risk from his emotions.

In the intro the author states, “I published a story called "The Anniversary Dance," about a young, sexually repressed wife who turned to stripping as a way to help her open up to her husband. This story is another take on the theme, but the wife in this story has a much different motive.”

The ONLY thing common about these two stories is the singular word anniversary. Providing the link to the other story is really just begging your readers, who’ve probably already read the referenced story in the link, to go back and read the story or at least review it again. Aside from the events are supposed to occur as each of the couples approaches an anniversary, these two stories really have nothing else in common except that they were written and published by saddletramp.

I really liked this Story . I hope that T-Boned and his friends enjoy the Prison ? I Bet RJ will be a Big Hit in c Block ..

I really liked the story 5*

I know what to expect with Tramp and I appreciate him but this story needed more thinking it through

Different and enjoyable read. Nice twists mixed with real facts and fiction / creative license. I liked the ending that he was looking and not the usual happy ever after with a great new women. The ending gave it more depth!

Please keep writing and I will keep reading.

Back with another entertaining, though too short, story. Ideal length for your stories is 5 to 6 pages. These short ones seem to end as soon as they get going good. No supernatural help here for our Hulkish hero, but he didn’t need any. You’re amazingly prolific, and yet keep them fresh and interesting. You have my thanks, and my envy.

Over the top fantasy. Quite enjoyable.

My grammar lesson for the day: Do an internet search on "lie versus lay" - the Tramp, like most authors here get it consistently wrong, especially in the past tense (lay versus laid.)

Keep 'em comin'.

Not hardly.... they have a branch campus there, but the actual University is in Seattle.

The story as usual with youth was very nicely done.

I can just imagine. :)

I know this is a story but what it dont get is how she never met the sister or even recognize her after being married and dated that long

You can have a story that stretches the limits of believability. Hollywood does it all the time and so do serious authors however there is a limit and the line between fantasy and ridiculousness is not a fine one.

This was just lazy writing - first of all, just Google "University of Washington" and you'll see that its right in the middle of Seattle.

The dinner date with his sister could have worked better if it was a cousin who the idiotic wife - and she was too unbelievably stupid - may not have known. Like the other commentors mention, shouting out "she's my sister" is far more realistic, certainty that's what I would have done. But I also, knowing this fictional wife was insanely jealous and had already hired PI's, might have mentioned either before I left or on a previous call to her - "oh, by the way, I'm meeting up with my sister Lisa while I'm in Seattle. You remember, she's a student at the UW."

The story still could have been reasonably feasible but it would have taken some more work on your part but it would have been a much better story.

Ludicrous from beginning to end.

Really dumb and juvenile, and absolutely entertaining. Enjoy a good btb.

Shame that these good yarns are disappearing and LW is becoming a section for wimps, cucks and romantics.

I thought the same myself. But upon second thought, without outright saying it they never meet again, ST1956 mentioned the sister being at their wedding 6 years prior, and that’s it. There is no mention of them ever meeting again. So imagine your wedding, and you’re meeting 50-100 new people, you’re thinking of the wedding itself and not the people you are introduced to and see for a total of 4-5 minutes (even hubby’s sister), then you rush off to your honeymoon.

Unless you go over your wedding album several times AND everyone is clearly labeled, and/or hubby is there to point everyone out each time, you MIGHT not recognize the sister. If I recall, sis was in university at the time, so hair dyed pink? Nose ring? And now she’s out in the real world, so styled hair and no facial jewelry? And, unless hubby has several recent-ish photos of his side of the family up on the wall, that may have been the only time she’d seen the sister. Yeah, a little bit of suspension of disbelief, but not too big. Less than the disbelief I had of the wife going so totally off the rails and be that vindictive.

What John experiences sounds somewhat similar to Norse mythical Beserkers. DanielQSteele has a similar character in his "When We Were Married" series.

I had something vaguely similar happen when my wife took my car somewhere and I had left my flip phone in the car. Someone called my phone and had hung up by the time she answered it. She didn't recognize the number and came into the house asking me who it was. She had called them back and "a woman" answered. I didn't recognize the number and I told her I had no clue who it was. I told her to check my call log to see if the number appeared and it didn't. I told her if she didn't trust me, to feel free to check my phone at any time. As far as I know, she has never checked my phones even though she knows my PIN for my smartphone (and I know hers). It did unnerve me since it made me feel vulnerable to any wrong number call, but c'est la vie.

@kmreader, you answered your own question. The theme was anniversary related. Very good.

@lujon2019, where in The Anniversary Dance did it say she rubbed herself on dozens of men including your own cousin?

Sbrooks, she only met her one time, 5 years previous.

I've had adrenaline episodes like those described. It's high stress related and I remember nothing during the actions. In my younger years a punch would set me off and it took a few people to stop me. So yeah those things can and do happen!

I love the Hulking out aspect. Great job!!!

I lived in WA for about 17 years and the University of Washington is definitely located in the city of Seattle, WA, not Tacoma.

Pretty good story, though.

Adrenaline super strength is very possible. A 50+ year old man was trapped under his car when the jack slid out from underneath it. His wife (nearly 50 years old) somehow managed to not only lift the car, but dragged her husband out to safety.

Also, I was helping my father-in-law and his father cut trees down to be cut up into firewood. My two young brothers-in-law (13 and 11) were helping to stack the firewood. My father-in-law had just sawed through a tree and it was beginning it's descent when a sudden big wind changed the trees angle of descent and it fell on top of my father-in-law. His 11 year-old son got to him first and lifted the tree off of him and tossed it away. Later, the grandfather and I tried to pick up the tree, but were unable to do so. I am a firm believer in adrenaline-powered super strength..

Someone, please, help me locate a story about a wife who treated herself to her own anniversary party, leaving her husband embarrassed as he tried to explain his wife's absence from the anniversary party he had planned and paid for.

Tramp and his wounded knight archetypes.

He should have given his whore wife the same treatment he gave her "thugs" that were gonna teach him a lesson. Better yet, just snap her neck and plead temporary insanity...

The Hulk Lives

Interesting and creative take on a cheating wife story. Great job on doing dialogue and packed a lot into 3 pages. Well done. Thanks.

It's interesting that you talk about your research. Hard to believe any research went into a story that thinks that things could get to the web before they get to the internet, what a complete gibberish sequence of dialogue...

"He has the video," John said. "As far as I know, it never got to the Internet."

"But it would have gotten to the web," she said.

"Oh yes," he told her.

The love child of The Hulk and Chuck Norris finally met his arch enemy in Super Jealousy Girl!

After a titanic battle Hulk Norris emerged sad but wealthy.

Stay tuned for the epic sequel "Hulk Norris vs the Washing Machine"....

Back in March 2019, I published a story called "The Anniversary Dance," about a young, sexually repressed wife who turned to stripping as a way to help her open up to her husband.

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Back in March 2019, I published a story called "The Anniversary Dance," about a young, sexually repressed wife who turned to stripping as a way to deny her husband dozens of first time sexual experiences, that she instead gave to her cousin.

Usually love this author but its one of his too over the top to actually enjoy stories.

Should’ve crippled them all, including the wife,

Stopped reading when you made the whore a mud shark .

One star

This needs a follow up.

I expect the best from saddletramp and I've never been disappointed . I truly like the plots and the way they're blended . Keep up the good work .

needs a follow up

Excellent!

What can I say? This was an excellent tale of revenge and retribution. Saddletramp you did it again. Keep them coming...

Five Stars

Can’t see her getting 20 years. She could have pleaded temporary insanity or rolled on the others. If convicted she might have gotten 5-10 in prison. Out in 3-6. The others would likely get a longer sentence. But they did have the others sign release forms so how much jail time would likely be only in his case.I’d say15 years out in 12.

Great story. Always enjoy reading your submissions. 5stars,the Bear always approves. Keep up the good work.

The BEAR

Yeah because he wouldn’t have immediately said that’s my sister you stupid bitch 🙄

The wife and her buddies are filth that deserved to rot in prison, the sentences they had is believable considering vile their acts. I dont know if something like that site exists but if it did it wouldnt be long til they picked the wrong husband who wouldnt break free but after been raped and humiliated then let go would go on a killing spree starting with the wife then these guys. I know many men who at the absolute minmum, would murder there wives for this.

When a setup is this ridiculous, it's pretty funny when the story subsequently goes through the motions of a normal courtroom drama, like it's not a fucking comedy at this point. And shit, if Steven Seagal is his frame of reference, he should have had his ass kicked. That's just slow one-on-one dance routines rather than 'Hulk smash!' territory.

@Timriv: Temporary insanity for a plan she orchestrated and carried out over a number of days? Stretching the definition of temporary there a wee bit.

Don't especially like this story but I am really amazed at the number of comments where the comments treat this fantasy story as though it's a real life story. It's frightening really that there are people out there that can't tell fantasy from reality. These people vote isn't that just scary.

A good story, AAA+++

Incomplete ending. Otherwise good

Preposterous nonsense. Now I understand that ST uses a lot of fantasy in his plots so he deserves a higher level of tolerance. However, the conversation between hubby and "Donna" is so utterly moronic that there is no excuse to write nonsense like that.