All Comments on 'Another First Date Ch. 01'

oh my god, this was great!!! very nicely written, i love the dialogue as well. I'm curious and excited to read more! :)

Great start, but ended a bit abruptly even for a chapter 1... please continue. More development per installment would be good.

I need this sort of sexual tension in my writing! Well done and nice description of your lead, she came to life in my mind with a bit of personality shining through

You tease...ending the chapter on that note and leaving us wanting more. Also, I appreciate the details and thoughtfulness that make the story feel real, like the little touch of her lighting the candles and then immediately blowing them out.

Very Real; love the details; great unexpected conclusion

I can't help but wonder how similar Cassandra's lips are to yours, and that's a perfect example of a great writer, who lures her readers into her story. Bravo

both smart modern people...and he did make her wet...