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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awkward

You really need to use different vocabulary. It looks like a fumbly attempt to sound suave and sexy, but the word choice is just cringy.

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#1: I'm on literotica for the naughty creative writing collaborative, NOT dating (virtual or otherwise). #2: Y'all demanded: the sequel to attempted-horror "Pregnant Ride!" is currently being written--ETA June 2024 Zyx is an alien trapped in human form. She was a revolutiona...