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Click here"Oh my God," you said, when we were settled back together, the alarm finally off. "That may have been the most intense orgasm I have ever had. I feel like my whole body came. I think I felt it in my hair and teeth."
"I agree," I answered.
"I wasn't sure we'd ever do that again," you said.
"I was sure we wouldn't," I answered.
At the airport, you kissed my forehead and made no promises. I watched you walk through the doors and into the terminal. It rended me a little.
As I drove home, I realized GF&CF was a feint. I wasn't ready for it. I wanted what I felt when I was making love to you.
As with all your stories, this one gives me lots to think about. I hate it when you don’t give me the HEA ending, but I understand why. It would lose the gritty reality. Keep writing, David. I always look forward to discovering what’s next!
Hot, sexy, passionate. What's not to love? Loved it as I have loved every story of yours that I've read.
Expertly woven between the sex and what wasn’t completely said out loud, a relationship formed. Whether or not that bond has a future doesn’t really matter. It changed the two of them forever.
This is a great story. It's really well written, and sexy. As a rule, I usually don't read stories over two pages because they tend to get too wordy. But I would not edit anything out. I have a new favorite contributor!
So many great lines but if I chose a favorite I would go with "Anger and resentment corrode the vessel that carries them," because it’s so very, very true. There’s a heaviness to this but the admission of the “feint” ends this on a hopeful note…to me. Jacks is a complex character. I hope we meet again.
So many great lines but if I chose a favorite I would go with "Anger and resentment corrode the vessel that carries them," because it’s so very, very true. There’s a heaviness to this but the admission of the “feint” ends this on a hopeful note…to me. Jacks is a complex character. I hope we meet again.
Wow, so hot, so passionate! These guys seem like they've got a powerful connection with each other. Really hope this isn't the end for them. This was an easy *****s. MLF