All Comments on 'Another Love Pt. 02'

"I have to tell you about a wonderful man who was there for me when I needed him. First he helped me sexually... and he took care of my kids and me." I would have just told to fuckoff and then divorce her. Jus wife should have remained faithful while he was at war! She was just another slut! She really didn't care about her husband.

....."Neither of us have done anything wrong!!!" More idiocy isnt possible!! Seems that author likes to be the cuckold/wimp!! The apple never falls far from the tree!!!

did not write her as a good wife. Get some counseling.

Yes, that would be good if he were here. Our hero could kill the little French fop.

And why is the painting not destroyed? WTF?

family is dead to him.

fuck you for writing this. I'm going to finish it again just so my fuck you sentiment is more informed.

see if he leaves four comments in a row on second chapter, LOL

He takes potshots at people as an anon.

No excuse for a cheater. It's one thing if both parties agree to do this, but keeping your spouse out of the loop you're just nothing but a low life cheater.

More sniveling comments from sniveling people. Another nice extension of the story from the wife’s perspective. She claims to love him with all her heart, but she knows he is a clueless emotionally distant man. I figure he must be on the autism scale a good ways: hyper focused on work, and terrible with social interactions. Poor guys need love too, and he had a good run with his relationship. I just hate when long term marriages hit the skids.

when they should have been short term marriages.

That "beautiful" painting should have been destroyed. Bleached or even burnt perhaps. They tried to make out it was an expression of love and that useless dick of a husband just leaves it intact. No way.

The unremorseful cheating slut and the butt-pirate son both keeping this secret from her husband. Should have figured. Mom raised her son to view his dad as the enemy who must never know the truth and now she wonders why they are estranged!? This is ripe BTB material, but I remember the author saying it won't be BTB. I have a feeling I'm going to be dissatisfied with the ending to this story

He should have stepped through the portrait! So when she came home she should have found the destroyed picture! It was a celebration of her infidelity no matter how you want to paint it! She's a low down whore, a SKANK!

She's a first class bitch! PERIOD!!!

I am not ashamed of what I have done, or sorry. I just hate that Rob knows and has been so hurt. It simply is not fair. Neither of us have done anything wrong. Why should we suffer?

SHE NEEDS TO SUFFER because she is an adulterer. She knew he would not buy it yet she still did it. This is heading some how that he will expect it. I am not saying they should reconcile but her inner thoughts means she should be divorced even if they stay with each other and the kids how could they keep quiet. This was not a fling. I have a bad feeling about this.

She got away with it for so long to the point the two families merged...without Rob. An interesting point to ponder. What if Rob discovered the truth while the lover was still alive...and forced her to choose? I truly believe that she would had chosen her lover over Rob. She was already accepted into his family and would simply been a 2nd wife or live-in mistress. She lost that option when the lover died. Rob was nothing but a back-up.

"I need to make sure that Rob understands that Philippe was the only other man and that it was not a sordid affair. I was and am a good woman and wife."

No you're not. You're a SLUT!

Note the even lower rating for part 2...

Doesn't matter how much the story tries to portray her as a loving wife but she says

"I am not ashamed of what I have done, or sorry." Typical way to justify it to herself.

But theres no way imo to justify cheating. It has not and necer will make a marriage better. The things she "learned" from phillipe are things she should have been learning with her husband. Sorry but this is the truth, anything else is just stupid lust, no love.

She lied and stole his life. She’s unrepentant. She deserves to die alone.

Hopefully the rmtwo of them come out of this stronger than ever.

You are not taking hubby down the path a military man would take.

The character as you wrote him would have taken all steps necessary to rid himself and his home of the cancer that was his wife. As soon as the door shut as the lovers wife was leaving, all the necessary calls and preparations would have been made to insure she never stepped foot in the house again. He was an engineer and a planner. It wouldn't have taken him 5 minutes to come up with his plan. What did you have him do? Move into the son's old apartment on the 4th floor!

What's really sad is that the wife's attitude as presented is the way a lot of women think. The conniving and the absolute soulless attitude of a lifelong affair is perfectly fine in her mind. The fact that even after it all comes to light that she could simply sit down and explain it all away is repugnant. And I won't even go into the fact that she included their children in the cover-up.

The first two chapters, despite all the military jargon and obvious writing talent, feels like something my teenage daughter writes - full of illogical, emotionally charged nonsense. The author may be a guy, but I'd be surprised. The author has the main character acting more like a passive woman than a man of action. Most commenters have pointed out the obvious flaws. A man of action would have harshly confronted his sons, tossed the bitch out, etc. He could use the publicity surrounding the retrospective show to go on national talk shows to tell everyone about his cheating whore of a wife and his backstabbing sons. He might even drop comments that employers might expect sons as devious as his to act that way as employees. This is just off the top off my head. Instead, he acts like a passive woman. Turns the entire story into a rather silly take.

'I am not ashamed of what I have done, or sorry. I just hate that Rob knows and has been so hurt. It simply is not fair. Neither of us have done anything wrong. Why should we suffer?

I decide the best thing to do is make Rob a good dinner and try to talk. I need to explain the unexplainable. '

she's not ashamed, nor sorry. she's only upset that she hurt rob? fuck....i'm not even married to the guy, and I FEEL BAD AND ASHAMED FOR HER. if she can't feel ashamed for HURTING the man she claims to love....she has no shame. she's not sorry for LYING to someone? she's not sorry for a shame marriage? she's not sorry she didn't give her husband all her love, all her body, all her trust....while he gave it all to her? she's a psycho.

all three of these losers had lovers outside their marriage. they all talked about it too. but no one told her husband. that's how little they respect him. that's how little they care about him. everyone is probably going to call him closed minded, but THEY were afraid to let him join in. THEY were the prudes. Selfish and all the rest.

this dumb bitch even SAYS she is trying to 'explain the unexplainable'. she can explain it, but not in a way that makes her FEEL good. and that's what it's all about...her justifying it. unable to own her shitty decisions. just own up to the fact that she doesn't deserve a faithful husband, or a nice husband. she needs an equally shitty and self absorbed person that lies and manipulates. she cheated...because she could. she hid it from him...because she didn't want to share her husband with anyone. that's the cold truth. and she doesn't feel sorry because...newsflash...she doesn't know how to love someone. she can fuck them. she can do pillow talk. she doesn't understand open communication, hard work, sacrifices. her notions of 'love' are infantile at best.

2nd read, this one passage points to her disillusion misunderstandings of marital vows; "It simply is not fair. Neither of us have done anything wrong."

Rob was never party to an 'OPEN' marriage. Apparently he did not know of her postpartum condition or her fear of raising sons while he went off to war (under orders). Rob being an O5/Cmdr, gave her plenty of Navy/DoD resources to help here - including medical/psych & child care. She by choice never availed to any Navy's help.

Instead she became a CHEATER for convenience. Then to brainwash her boys into never divulging - I hope Rob kicks her to the curb as used trash especially when he finds out this affair continued every year for 20yrs until her paramour died.

I'm just surprised he's in the attic. As a retired O5 and Professor he's got to be making some very good money.

The wife is bloody delusional and as for the husband he should of left straight away. This story is total crap

That pretty much says it. Divorce can be an excellent solution to betrayal.

But I hate your leading ladies. Mostly I am sure because I was married to self-absorbed bitch just like them for 17 years.

Please continue to write and I will continue to enjoy the writing and hate what they do and have done to their poor husband's.

Thanks

She has to understand that this is not justifiable. There is no truth and honesty in their relationship. Pretty much from the beginning. When they had problems, they should have communicated , not tarried

The other wife uses the European theory that Americans are repressed, and not open to polyamory. But what is marriage or a relationship without honesty ? And sneaking off to her other family, her other substitute husband, only is made worse by the sacrifices he is making..

so she is a whore and he needs to get rid of thee slut and the rest of the bastards he goes to war for his country and she fucks a frenchman whore

I really love it when someone makes a better short comment than I ever could. The only thing I can add is she made her children cover for her whoring. Signed: BTW

Let French toast

I hate this lady and how she thinks. Like she "did nothing wrong."

Oh well. When I get a visceral reaction to a story, that story gets 5 starts. 5 stars! Well written. Amazing

Is there any way, you can kill someone more than once, or twice? How about make them suffer 2 lifetimes in one. Everyone makes mistakes, it's nature I've been told. This was not a mistake, or accident, or one time deal was it. She needs some special treatment. What if the roles where reversed? Fry the bitch.

Hi, Love your style, you have woven a tale of shear horror, and restraint, any man or woman discovering the magnitude of deceit, leveled would have removed the offending head from the black hearted torso. To betray a man that has gone to war for any reason is nothing less than TREASON, to that man and country.

This woman is delusional.

Uh. Not so much.

How does anyone like this? The woman is the epitome of narcissistic and her kids are assholes too.

When I first started reading this story I was begining to think that I had read it before as it took almost a whole page of describing his wife, but lo and behold it was not, The other one I read had a husband to dumb to move out and in the meantime the wife brought all her lovers relatives to spend the holidays with them and parade her cuck in front of everyone. in the end she convinced him to accept his roll in the food chain, and eventually sleep with her and her lovers wife. That sir was a very messed up story, glad this wasn it.

IF she had done nothing else, she did him wrong in thought.

Lying, cheating, making the oldest son lie for her, and then having the audacity to make demands. While he's fighting for the country she is shacked up in their own marital bed with this interloper living off Rob's money no doubt.

She is one horrible delusional cunt with not an ounce of remorse who deserves kicking to the kerb.

Pt 3 and 4 are listed under group sex, so I think that's going in a direction of him getting more or her getting more maybe the husband being a good little cuck and doing as Avril and Slut tell him.

Sorry for having a wife so stupid to think she had done nothing wrong, I can't go above 2 stars.

Oh geez. I know it's fiction, just a story, but it hits hard. I don't understand the wife though, as written she doesn't seem to act like she thinks that there's anything wrong with what she did. But she must have since she never told Rob.

Well, Lazarus Long wrote about (or the guy who invented him, can't remember if it's Asimov or Heinline/Heinlein?) but anyway Long claims that the more you love the more you can love. I guess the wife (I'm terrible remember names LOL) can love two people, but sheesh, she might have spiced up their love life, but she had to realize that she was playing with dynamite.

Nothing in this chapter makes a reader hate Karen any less. Why did he not destroy the painting immediately? Karen is a stone bitch.

She betrays her husband in the worst way that a wife can. She is so weak and useless without a man that she takes up with another as soon as her husband ships out. She pits her six year old sun against her husband. I loved the story, but hate Karen.

I know this goes on but this chapter was poor. destroy the painting, do something. 2*

Comments are welcome but don't feel you need to tell me what a slut my heroine is after all I wrote her as a good wife."

the author obviously does not understand a good wife does not cheat on her Husband.

Sorry gave it 1 * too twisted for me.

To paint the wife character as a likeable person. Trying to justify her actions. I mean after all she only fucked the guy so she could be a better lovet and wife to her husband. Right? She has to rank right up there as one of the top 3 most hated cheaters in the entire LW genre. It was actually laughable at the end when she poundrd on his door telling him she was his loving wife and he needed to listen to her wonderful "love story". Every man I know in RL would have yelled back through the door "fuck off you lying, cheating cunt!" Ok...maybe they would have used "whore" or "slut", but it woulda been something like that.

The last line kinda says it all for this woman, he helped when I was left alone when he husbands was called to war.

So it’s a love affair, oh good, no harm no foul. She cheated with the same ass wipe for most of her marriage and it’s hard to compete with three in the bed and two in her head...Bitch

I suggest that readers read "Another Love: Lost" by GeorgeAnderson, which provides a much better written and more plausible ending to the story. https://www.literotica.com/s/another-love-lost?page=1

Karen had given herself fully to her lover and denied her husband for 20 years, and caused her sons to be estranged from their father, and did so without regret or apology. And we are expected to believe that a husband would accept such betrayal simply because he would have a threesome with two whores?

The ending by GeorgeAnderson is still somewhat unsatisfactory because karen was not really punished, but at least we do not have wimp of a husband willing to accept 20 years of betrayal and denial.

This was awful

Why not take everything he wanted from the house ? He should have Divorced her Cheating Slutty Ass ..

wife cheated on the husband. do not understand the wifes claim she has done nothing wrong.

If she really thinks she did nothing wrong why did she hide it? Divorce the whore! Can't really be happy married to someone you can't trust!

“I’ve done nothing wrong” , sure you have you dumb bitch you cheated on your husband and the father of your children ! Why is it these bitches don’t see their fault in their own actions ? Are they that blindly stupid or that naive ? Do they really not see the damage they’re causing , not fully grasping the depth of their depravity ? If the shoe was on the other foot would they write off their husbands infidelity and not even be the least bit miffed ? Would they , with their blessing , allow their husbands to continue to indulge In an extramarital relationship with some beautiful woman to whom he professed his love and desire ? Why then would she expect him to Would she condemn , condone , encourage , or even actively participate in the sex acts ? They’re cheating is expected to be tolerated at the very least ? There was is no justification in her reasoning , just self delusion !

Her stupidity amazes me!

Her husband was called to duty and she acts as though he abandoned her "in her time of need" when in fact, she already had her husband's replacement waiting on the other side of her bedroom door.

cheating cunt, sorry she really is

After rereading several times I’m confused. Excellent writing skills, fairly good plot development and even better character development. The challenge is the premise. But in the underpinnings you can find it if you look closely. There’s 2 kinds of men. The alpha male, in this case Rob, are the minority. They are the glue that bring balance and order to the world. The other men are of a more liberal stature. They are the artiste’s and communists. The “free thinkers” that the alphas have to spend time saving themselves from...well... themselves. A man like Rob might in fact live upstairs for a while until he gets his ducks in a row. He would absolutely NEVER sit in his boxers and listen to the wife of the man who destroyed his world (part 3-4), and any woman who marries and STAYS with an alpha for 25 years would know damn well that having her second affair with her lovers wife under aN already distressed alphas nose would be catastrophic. Take it from an alpha who’s on marriage #3 and who’s caught most of them cheating red handed, we are not gentle and kind. We live by a code of conduct 95% of humans can’t live up to. We are rigid, but we still love deeply when the right woman comes along. Karen is NOT the right woman for Rob to begin with. To get to year 25 would be a miracle. And it shows in this chapter with all the estrangement. That’s the key to. A doomed part 3-4. He would likely be starting a relationship with his 25 yr old asst long before apvil arrived to console Karen

More RG faggot fodder. Give it up.

14 days ago, f of you twat, you really have not got a clue. Life is so complicated for a massive amount of people, this is a story about the realityies of life and all of the difficulties we all encounter.

By the way for every so called cheating wife /girlfriend there is a possible cheating husband /boyfriend. No one ever comments about that.

1 Star - Not even worth a comment.

Well, there go 20 minutes of my life down the drain for nothing. Not worth it. Should ask the author for compensation for my time wasted.

To anonymous critic who has no intestinal fortitude to identify himself, why are reading these stories if you hat the author so much? After all they are free stories, no one is forcing you to read them. They are fiction and many of us enjoy them as the author is very talented. Keep writing please and also thanks to the editors her so important.

No, no, no, no! She feels no shame or guilt for the affair - because she "needed" it??

Every one of her reasons are pure, psychotic lies!

This is a full-blown sociopath - she has no reel feelings. If she can't feel shame or guilt for her infidelity, she certainly can't feel love for her husband - or for Phillipe. She only feels what she herself needs, wants, desires. She deserves everything she covets - in spite of how or whom it hurts. There is only "ME"! Even sacrifices her own son to lie heinously to his own father for 20 years!

Just barbaric! There is no redeeming values here at all. The fact that the husband didn't burn the painting, throw all her possessions out and change the locks on the door; then begin divorce proceedings is enough premonition he will ultimately cave in as nothing more than a Navy coward, sissyboy cuckold. A gutless loser who'd be better off walking in front of a running jet engine - nothing left but a mist of yellowed blood. I'm done with this garbage here and now. Bye!

Ugh.

Such a disgusting human being.

She literally knows her husband is suffering after his tour in the gulf and she still wharfing down croissants.

She manipulated the children, was completely dishonest with her husband, and showed no remorse.

An extramarital affair is still cheating… and it’s still something a shitty person would do. If she wasn’t shitty she wouldn’t have hid what she was doing.

Will not be reading parts 3 and 4

And just to follow up… No… you did NOT write her as a good wife and she deserves all of the tar and feathering she’s getting from the comment section

I like all the sequels better than the original but the power that your original story created to inspire such sequels can't be denied. Just because I don't like the approach doesn't mean it's bad. Just the opposite. Great job making a story that causes so much passion.

Wow she truly is delusional. She doesn't feel bad or ashamed. She has done nothing wrong? A love story with another man? I hope she dies alone, lonely, and distraught.

What an appalling woman. Her husband finds out that another man was her soul mate and the great love of her life, and "you owe me" is her attitude.

how do you make a slut a loving wife his fucking kids knew she was cheating with anorther man no wonder they were estrangedf from thier father a few decades of betral but hey he taught her how to enjoy sex again hnow the book she used could have done it for her but what fun would that be?? dam i love your writting but come one who would accept that bullshit as truth little love my ass bull and cuck no love there worth saving

and why the fucfk is the whore thasn enabled i8t still in hios house i would be less shocked if her and the painting were not both buied in the back yrd wtf dfid he not cjhange the locks just fuck no not always a big fan of burning to the ground but long term betrayal and destroying any chance for a loving family no coming back from that shit

gad every time i reread this the slut karen is worse and worse

how does that whore deem to make demands?

Another good story but if course a sad on about a cheating wife trying to explain to her husband about her several year affair. Trying to justify it trying tell her husband how good her lover was helping her deal with her husband being away. Good luck. The writer is good but there is no justification to make it right.

Pure filth

This is so stupid it is insulting. She has two kids, who NEVER mention to their dad, that, oih, yeah, there was this guy who,lived with us while you were away? I would rate this at negative 5 stars! Why bother go go to all the effort to write such drivel?

"Robert McDonald, this is your wife. The woman you have been married to for the last twenty-five years. I am the mother of your two sons and the person who loves you more than her own life. What a crock of shit this faithless whore is just that

Wow. In the beginning of this chapter, she claims to not “fool around” but she did exactly that. And to claim to not know why Rob and Oscar are estranged is crap. She lied to the reader and is an unreliable narrator. I’ve read the whole story plus the Fallout alternate story and I can say this story as a whole is less than perfect. And definitely does not belong in the category “loving wives” deposit chapter 4.

Fallout has a better ending although it was very rushed and still ended unbelievably.

You have got to be kidding me: in the intro to this chapter, the author states he wrote Karen as a “good wife”. That is the biggest bull crap I’ve seen since Trump’s last speech. She is in fact, by definition, a horrible wife. She betrays her husband over many years. She is also a horrible mother, making her child complicit in hiding the affair. She is one of the lowest forms of life on this planet.

Slut and a whore

'I am not ashamed of what I have done, or sorry. I just hate that Rob knows and has been so hurt. It simply is not fair. "

What an selfish entitled and delusional cunt. She give a bad name to women everywhere.

"I am the mother of your two sons and the person who loves you more than her own life."

If that was true she'd took her own life a long time ago for all the horrors she inflicted upon her husband. But of course, narcissists think to highly of themselves to ever consider suicide. She's a true sociopath with no empathy for anyone but her self. She feels no sense of guilt or shame because she rationalizes all her behavior down to her wants and desires and everyone else is just collateral damage that's acceptable.

"It simply is not fair. Neither of us have done anything wrong. Why should we suffer?" Yeah, right! He didn't; she sure 'n hell did. Great job, Author!

Typical bullshit for this author. The whole premise is preposterous. "Avril" did not know that "Rob" and "Karen" did not have "open marriage"? Really, this is what the author wants us to accept as believable. Then he proceeds with his regular BS on open marriages.

For the amount of BS this RG has produced on LW one really needs four floors with 8 toilets.

Utter crap. How can such drivel come out of an author. I only loved two men is such bullshit. He is off fighting a war and some low life jumps into his family and the whole family disrespect him and it is supposed to be ok because she was in love. Hate this.

Simple truth, He was faithful to her, she was not faithful to him, SHE MUST SUFFER!

I really do not see how she is Aggie wife. It’s not about being a slut. It’s just all about her. Husband and children be damned

Yes, she has done something wrong. Pity that she cannot see it. Perhaps she spoke no vows when she wed?

Disgusting

Fantastic second part

Fantastic second part

Typical female.

Another bunch of BS. Still wish asshole was alive. Damn homewreacker.

that was some shit.

Excellent work. But you slip a little. The last sentence of her coming clean for y

Her actions is to blame him. Her sexual issues are an accusation of him and then he left her. Not the way a loving wife takes responsibility

Fucking asshole cheating slut whore wife! If I was him, I would start a fire late at night and let the house. Burn down, prob not call fire dept. And leave. What a slut whore!!!

It's always the man's fault, she used her son, and damaged that relationship beyond repair. But, hey the tramp got her needs met. These Hoes ain't loyal.

DELUDED, SELF-CENTERED WHORE! He should have changed the locks, etc... and ejected her from his life completely and the sons as well for their disloyalty.

There is NO WAY that she qualifies as a good wife, mother or human being, she took advantage of a loving, trusting, faithful husband just because she is a weak piece of garbage!

"...I am not ashamed of what I have done, or sorry..."

The core of her thinking that blocks her husbands reasoning, ability to even try to understand, along with making his children lie to him, in addition to her lies, for so many years.

I'd be unreasonable angry and unkind, lost, and broken. I don't know if I could or would want to even try to live with her.