by lyricalcandy
Lyrical,
I'm not usually fond of Non-Human stories, but this is very well crafted. The story flows and builds to a wonderful climax.
I cant belive how fluidly this was written it is amzing I certanly hope you continue the story of Lyric and her love.
I enjoyed this continuation enormously! I agree, it's very well written - can't tell you how nice it is during the read to not get hung up on misused words and letters and creative tenses :D Bravo, please do keep writing - anything a'tall, doesn't matter :)
though the pinnacle of their lovemaking I felt was a little too rushed.
I'm not fond of the NonHuman genre, but this one was absolutely wonderful, nontheless.
Great continuation of the first one. Makes me want a Vampire for a lover :)
Vampires have always been utterly sexy to me, and now they are even more so. Where can I find one? lol
I've always found vampires utterly sexy! Brilliantly written though I agree that their union was too brief!
You out did yourself.Couldn't put it down from start to end. Hope to see more .
Extremely well done.. I must find me a vampire like that.. yummy.. Keep up the great work!
I thoroughly enjoyed this story from start to finish and hope to see more of Lyric and her vampire. I never was a fan of vampires, but after reading this story, I'm beginning to change my mind.
I am in awe of your writing ability. Your stories are entrancing and I hope to see many more in the future. I am a fan of Vampires and this was exactly what I was looking for. Now if only I could find one like Davinci for myself *grin*
Oh my, how I wish that there were more Davinci's in this world. Truely a beautiful story. You as a writer transforms the reader to that place in time and I found it devilishly divine. Thank you so much and I do hope you continue to write more.
Please continue your writing you paint the most amazing word pictures.