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AutistAdventurerAutistAdventurerover 3 years ago
you succeeded this time Bebop.

You really did.

SithLord6969SithLord6969over 3 years ago

Incredible

My wife is dying. She will cross over long before I will. I anticipate the day when she and our dogs will be waiting for me in that piece when shadows never fall...

Thank you for this moving tale of love

Lector77Lector77over 3 years ago
Thank you.

Your stories, without exception, give not only pleasure but cause for thought and feeling.

rawallacerawallaceover 3 years ago
Add to the Account

I think you can consider this a positive entry in your ledger, Well done! Well done indeed.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago
Damn, that was good!!! 5***** and then some.

I confess that I've been thinking about 750 word stories and wrote 5 hoping for one of those competitions that has not materialized. None are as good as this. This was powerful and moving. Great job and thank you for sharing this!

acupacupover 3 years ago
Dedication and devotion

It says it all. Well written.

johsunjohsunover 3 years ago

Wow! Short but really good. Yes, I cried.

SteelaSteelaover 3 years ago

Yay! Another story!

chastenchastenover 3 years ago

Excellent addition!

PickFictionPickFictionover 3 years ago
Excellent

Great story, as always.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 3 years ago
Very nice story

Hopefully there are more stories you can tell before the end. Thanks

john_sixfooterjohn_sixfooterover 3 years ago
Very well done!

Very touching, tear provoking, and lovely. Heaven, indeed.

johntcookseyjohntcookseyover 3 years ago

Jeez - How’d that happen? I’m a blubbering mess! Superb

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 3 years ago
Seriously

I'd love to buy a bound collection of your stories compiled in order with author notes. I'd pay a lot of money for something like that.

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Wonderful

And so very sweet. It doesn't matter whether you share 750 or 750,000 words with us, you always capture the emotions perfectly.

clearedtofuckclearedtofuckover 3 years ago
Perplexed

I'm not going to rate this story because I can't settle on what the rating would be. I know it is a 750 word story, but it needs to be much longer. I think it is an outstanding start to a great story. Maybe you could write the entire story from the start, without the word limit. It was very interesting.

steppinontoessteppinontoesover 3 years ago
Outstanding

Absolutely amazing

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionover 3 years ago

Aww. It must be early because I've got some irritating sleep dust in my eye. Beautiful.

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 3 years ago

5* doesn't say enough. Thank you for sharing your incredible talent.

teedeedubteedeedubover 3 years ago
I don't

know what to say. Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A moving, heartfelt story that more than succeeded. All the readers seem to feel the same, rare in deed. The only detractor felt it too short, he was very much out voted. Thank you so much! 5*

OvercriticalOvercriticalover 3 years ago
Here's another detractor

This supernatural nonsense is hardly worth reading. Sure, old people who live a long time with their partners are hoping to reconnect in the next world and anyone who believes that crap deserves more stories like this one. I feel for the people who read this and think it makes sense. 2*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love stories like this. The detractor may one day wonder why he was the only one whose heart is so hurt. Pity, but you need to have hope for it to work.

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

WOW, that was way deep but I loved it. 5 BIG WHITE FLUFFY STARS and a thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Another five star 🌟💫🌟💫🌟💫🌟💫🌟

WolfOfTheWorldWolfOfTheWorld6 months ago

💥💥💥💥💥 I wish I could give 15 more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It was hopeful. Not necessarily needed to elaborate.

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I'm about 55,000 words into Secondhand Hearts, a new story in the Hop on the Bus series. If I can figure out a way to post it here without it being stolen and posted on Amazon, I should have it ready in about a week or so. There's someone who has stolen about eight of my stor...

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