by Bebop3
Incredible
My wife is dying. She will cross over long before I will. I anticipate the day when she and our dogs will be waiting for me in that piece when shadows never fall...
Thank you for this moving tale of love
Your stories, without exception, give not only pleasure but cause for thought and feeling.
I think you can consider this a positive entry in your ledger, Well done! Well done indeed.
I confess that I've been thinking about 750 word stories and wrote 5 hoping for one of those competitions that has not materialized. None are as good as this. This was powerful and moving. Great job and thank you for sharing this!
Hopefully there are more stories you can tell before the end. Thanks
Very touching, tear provoking, and lovely. Heaven, indeed.
I'd love to buy a bound collection of your stories compiled in order with author notes. I'd pay a lot of money for something like that.
And so very sweet. It doesn't matter whether you share 750 or 750,000 words with us, you always capture the emotions perfectly.
I'm not going to rate this story because I can't settle on what the rating would be. I know it is a 750 word story, but it needs to be much longer. I think it is an outstanding start to a great story. Maybe you could write the entire story from the start, without the word limit. It was very interesting.
Aww. It must be early because I've got some irritating sleep dust in my eye. Beautiful.
A moving, heartfelt story that more than succeeded. All the readers seem to feel the same, rare in deed. The only detractor felt it too short, he was very much out voted. Thank you so much! 5*
This supernatural nonsense is hardly worth reading. Sure, old people who live a long time with their partners are hoping to reconnect in the next world and anyone who believes that crap deserves more stories like this one. I feel for the people who read this and think it makes sense. 2*
I love stories like this. The detractor may one day wonder why he was the only one whose heart is so hurt. Pity, but you need to have hope for it to work.
WOW, that was way deep but I loved it. 5 BIG WHITE FLUFFY STARS and a thank you!