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All Comments on 'Another Use For the Family Bathroom'

by bettiezyx

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cjchesscjchessabout 4 years ago
too short

This story was good. It was engaging, and it left off on a decent cliffhanger. HOWEVER, the cliffhanger happens way too soon, barely anything happens, and the sex scene ends VERY fast. Talk about premature ejaculation.

bettiezyxbettiezyxabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you

@cjchess:

Alright

Thank you for the feedback

(-B

ealexerealexerover 3 years ago
Intense

A great story that could be even better.

Maybe someday.....

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