by drkhonesty
But just way too short to be judged fairly. Seemed more like a page 1 of Chapter 1, interesting enough to make a reader turn to page 2. Only, there is no page 2, damn it.
Have read three of your stories and all three seem to be left unfinished, or could it be you them so the reader can use his or her ending. Guess I'll have to pass on the rest of your work.