All Comments on 'Answer to Every Woman's Prayer Ch. 01'

by drkhonesty

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RasmatRasmatover 8 years ago
Looks like a good start.

But just way too short to be judged fairly. Seemed more like a page 1 of Chapter 1, interesting enough to make a reader turn to page 2. Only, there is no page 2, damn it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
ARE ALL YOUR SUBMISSIONS UN FINISHED?

Have read three of your stories and all three seem to be left unfinished, or could it be you them so the reader can use his or her ending. Guess I'll have to pass on the rest of your work.

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