All Comments on 'Anticipation'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Hours?

The hours should have stretched into years!

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
JUST A FUCK

It was jus a fuck, while her other man/husband left her.

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
JUST A FUCK

It was jus a fuck, while her other man/husband left her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
SO COLD...

SO cold and lonely - before during and after. not sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Why NOT

just leave your other man whom I'm guessing is your husband? Why put him and you into what will be a bad situation if he catchs youw ith the other man. If it were me you would be dad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
re:Why not

Oh come on. this is a story.. why do you have to be like that.She doesnt say its real life.even if so.maybe he deserved it!

gizzmo301gizzmo301almost 19 years ago
So

You loved the other man and not your hubby, Now he knows about the affair and leaves. So why can't you divorce him before continuing to cheat. well written story but to many holes in it

don87654don87654almost 19 years ago
Very, Very, Very, Very good!

With this assertiveness, he needs to keep fucking you behind your husband's back and then to knock you up, without your husband knowing that it is his baby you are carrying in your tummy, not your husband's.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
To The Prior Comment

Donnie - just get the sex change operation and get it over with - then you can pretend to be pregnant for your children and family - fellow workers - the band - the bus load of tourists - posterity - or go get your head worked on.

NicefellaNicefellaover 7 years ago
I loved it

:) Good work Ash

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Fucking whore

Guy needs to get out of this marriage. She's a fucking whorw.

iammweaseliammweaselalmost 2 years ago

Dumb is the appropriate word here.

Repression is an ugly mental issue, isnt it!

InfosaugerInfosaugerover 1 year ago

Why is she even married to her husband? Divorce him and marry her lover. She doesn't love or respect her husband.

RecooterRecooterabout 1 year ago

I thought it was exciting! Well done!

RecooterRecooterabout 1 year ago

I thought it was exciting! Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well written and to the point. Keep up the good work!

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