All Comments on 'Anticipation and Satisfaction'

by Jazz_E_too

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It was....different.

I gave it 4 stars because it seemed quite realistic but it was like watching a train wreck. You know how it’s going to end but a part of you hopes it won’t.

Regardless, thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
std testing

If this was to be at anytime close to reality then you should have written in that she makes a point to get tested for STD's on some regular basis. I mean as bad as she had become she was at one time an intelligent educated woman.

I know of a woman who was like this from high school age well into her 30's , It started with stripping and then lead into prostitution and she also loved it. She felt she had control and the money was very easy. She made testing a regular part of her "job" and yes she caught quite a few things that luckily were easy to treat. She did unfortunately end up with herpes at the end of her "career" but says she has no regrets. To each their own I guess.

Mustang88LXMustang88LXover 4 years ago
What a whiny heartless CUNT wife.

At least hubby was happy to get rid of the CUNT and have a better life. The ending is the only good part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Well Written and...

a new take on the hooker wife scenario. With the sex a little less explicit, it could be a mainstream morality play. I'm going to look at your other works with high expectations.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

The pitfalls and attractions to the low ground is a very real and present danger . I like the way you expose this morality decline in her life . The self respect erosion gets ignored once you’ve justified your actions to yourself . Blaming others for your predicament , missing the obvious warning signs , lying to yourself and covering up , leading a double life . All these things were justified or ignored by her and as a result she becomes consumed and her basic persona changes to the point that she’s no longer the person you knew and married . This story was spot on and correctly depicted and easily been nonfiction . Good job

mattenwmattenwabout 3 years ago

Don't be mad at me, but so much crap is not my thing. He can't be tested whether she gave him STD or HIV, he doesn't report her for prostitution and he doesn't take care of her pimps? What kind of a wimp is he?

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Bored whorewife takes it to town.

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