All Comments on 'Anubis'

Great story!

More please. My only criticism is that there is not enough, so yes, I will beg for more.

Forever.

Oh to be her!

This is good I like the way Anubis is

Now this one I liked too! Keep writing!!

For what other words could I use to describe the prayer, the homage, written above?

Blessed Be those who worship Anpu in all of His glory.

My favorite story!

You are amazing! More please? More of Anubis

I enjoyed the story line a lot. My only criticism is that it felt a bit rushed, like we were told the order of events in an overview. A little more detail and personal reactions from the characters would go a long way. Again, this is already a great story so I hope you take it as a compliment that I'd enjoy reading more to it!

If you are going to make a comment, get your facts straight. Anubis is the Jackal headed Egyptian God. I double checked that fact after reading your comment.

I love your story but it has one flaw, Set, Anubis's father is the red headed jackal-headed god of distruction. Anubis head is like a pharaoh hound or a great dane.

This is the shit!!! Lip smackin' nasty and then some.

Do keep it coming My Queen. One can feel the pulsing ecstasy of the

lucky recipient......ummmmhummmm.

how do you write so well?

Ra and Isis would be pleased

it was the best and seemed like this story could never end

:)

The hours and hours did irk me, as well, but it's not such an important problem. Great submission.

This was an incredibly good story, well written and quite interesting.

Anubis! I love you! you are so awesome!

I liked very much this story. The supernatural element is delicately treated, the description of sensual scenes rich and arousing, and the plot very imaginative. Compliments!

Blackbel2003

lol don't know what to say other than i really enjoyed reading it. i look forward to reading more stories. :)

I enjoyed the basic premise of this story very much. I'd really like to see the author push it a little further - more character development, less "hours and hours" of sex brushed over - but it's a great litte tale and plenty hot.

thank you!

awesomely written piece

again thank you for sharing..much enjoyed

Good writing, enjoyed it very much

Not sure what happened, my pc wigged out on me. The story was great BQ..

As always this was hot and erotic. If this is the same Barbarian Queen who wrote "The Hell Angel" (and I truly hope it is) your work is always, ALWAYS a pleasure to read.

Keep writing!

As always this was hot and erotic. If this is the same Barbarian Queen who wrote "The Hell Angel" (and I truly hope it is) your work is always, ALWAYS a pleasure to read.

Keep writing!

As always this was hot and erotic. If this is the same Barbarian Queen who wrote "The Hell Angel" (and I truly hope it is) your work is always, ALWAYS a pleasure to read.

Keep writing!

As always this was hot and erotic. If this is the same Barbarian Queen who wrote "The Hell Angel" (and I truly hope it is) your work is always, ALWAYS a pleasure to read.

Keep writing!

As always this was hot and erotic. If this is the same Barbarian Queen who wrote "The Hell Angel" (and I truly hope it is) your work is always, ALWAYS a pleasure to read.

Keep writing!

As always this was hot and erotic. If this is the same Barbarian Queen who wrote "The Hell Angel" (and I truly hope it is) your work is always, ALWAYS a pleasure to read.

Keep writing!

Only one critism, you need more character discription.

very very nice.... well written, thoughtful imagery....a very rarely seen side of Anubis....... a pleasure to read