All Comments on 'Any - and Everything Pt. 01 Ch. 03'

This may well become an excellent story. So far it is quite interesting. I'm curious whether the focus will be more on the magic or on the teenage aspects. (I hope on the magic...)

But write your own story, the way you feel is best and fits the characters best. That often results in the best stories.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

RW

The story is developing at a most pleasant pace. Please continue your world-building and the relationship between protagonists and please avoid adding magical smut just for word count. Of course magically enhanced sex is expected, bur a higher magic can be found by seeing your couple discover the deeper magic of a true relationship. Happi!y awaiting many more chapters.

Why are we still waiting for the next part?

It was going along decently until you had a 7 year old care for his catatonic mother for 3 months. I leave room for fiction (it's a genie story...) but the framework needs to be there - and that was just said "fuck it, I'm gonna slap this on cuz NO RULES!"