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All Comments on 'Anyone for Tennis, Dennis? Ch. 01'

by Nikki_Kernovii

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EssEssCehEssEssCeh4 months ago
Tropes, tropes, tropes...

Your effort brims with tropes (from which you deviate in some points - but there stay clearly apparent to those who care to look). But you another time that at least in the genre of smut, tropes can - if applied skillfully very much enhance the reading pleasure.

I spotted

- the millionaire dom with money and time to spare

- the inexpierenced sub with lots of potential

- the cinderella-subtone of the relationship,

- ...

I like that our gem in the raw subbie isn't quite an innocent damsel and has a life and hopefully an opinion of her own.

I look very much forward to read how your story plays out.

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