by AllthewayHolloway
It was good, interesting but not half that good as your first story, which I absolutely LOVED, sorry bro.
But I like the idea of super scent and linking it with erotic sensations. Abel
I like your writing style, the thought process shown for your characters. You have talent for that! I preferred your previous story, but this is also very good, because there seem to be more gentle interaction between characters, I like that.