All Comments on 'Aparna's boutique ordeal in Cochin.'

by Godsowncountry84

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very nice

Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

This was really good. When can we except more?

vandvandabout 4 years ago
Really enjoyed it

I loved the slow pace, great vivid description, and build up, please do more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Superb

Super story ... nice buildup.. please continue ..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Really a nice story

Don't worry about the ratings lower ratings are given by non indian readers. Indian readers would absolutely love your story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Magnificent — 5 stars

This is a terrific story. The only part that might seem strange to people here in the US is the concept of a (sexually) conservative society. That ship sailed a long time ago. The emotional content of your story comes straight through. There are a few places where a native English speaker could improve your wording, and the names of all the garments went right over my head. If it misfires with some people, well that’s their loss. I finished your story about an hour ago, and I am still thinking about it.

Godsowncountry84Godsowncountry84about 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

Thank you all for the encouragement.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
ആഹാ കൊച്ചി കാരനാ.. nice

നമ്മൾ മലയാളികൾ ഇല്ലാത്ത സ്ഥലം ഇൻഡോ

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

Please continue writting . Waiting for new stories from you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Pathetic

You took 3 pages to write in a wardrobe fail. Fuck, this guy must be really hard up - post in Exhibition not non-consent

Godsowncountry84Godsowncountry84about 4 years agoAuthor
Reply to anonymous

It is posted in exhibitionism and not in non consent. You are not forced to read it. I have given an introduction regarding the scenario where the story is happening. You should have left after the first paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very realistic

Well explained that awkward situations we all have in our life.Wow your skills are amazing. keep this series up add more twists and turns to it.

boss2125boss2125over 3 years ago
Really good

Realy good story, don't worry about the negative comments. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

One of the most realistic stories I had read ever . please keep on writing you have amazing narating skill .I can see what your words were saying thats the power of your skills. I pray god give you more such real life events so that you can tell us about that.

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