by Godsowncountry84
I loved the slow pace, great vivid description, and build up, please do more!
Don't worry about the ratings lower ratings are given by non indian readers. Indian readers would absolutely love your story
This is a terrific story. The only part that might seem strange to people here in the US is the concept of a (sexually) conservative society. That ship sailed a long time ago. The emotional content of your story comes straight through. There are a few places where a native English speaker could improve your wording, and the names of all the garments went right over my head. If it misfires with some people, well that’s their loss. I finished your story about an hour ago, and I am still thinking about it.
You took 3 pages to write in a wardrobe fail. Fuck, this guy must be really hard up - post in Exhibition not non-consent
It is posted in exhibitionism and not in non consent. You are not forced to read it. I have given an introduction regarding the scenario where the story is happening. You should have left after the first paragraph.
Well explained that awkward situations we all have in our life.Wow your skills are amazing. keep this series up add more twists and turns to it.
Realy good story, don't worry about the negative comments. Keep writing
One of the most realistic stories I had read ever . please keep on writing you have amazing narating skill .I can see what your words were saying thats the power of your skills. I pray god give you more such real life events so that you can tell us about that.