All Comments on 'Aphrodite Days in a Small Town'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Need to pay attention to grammar/spelling:

example:

"I ... work as a batista in the nearby coffee shop"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It's a pity it's such a short story. I'd like to read more about this town!

EdGuy1EdGuy1about 2 years ago

Hope we get a continuation of this story, so far this aphrodite days has a lot of potential.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great premise, can't wait for more in this universe!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A great start, left me wanting more :)

sammi_in_the_snowssammi_in_the_snowsabout 1 year ago

What a great idea: Aphrodite Days. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story that has to be continued!

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