by charmingcharles2896
A real step-up in ambition for you! I miss the mommy stuff, and the anal stuff isn't exactly for me, but there's a real commitment here to original storytelling. Well done!
Please expand on the viewpoint you kept in mind as you write; and express sexual enjoyment/focus/fascination. Objective contexts are superfluous for erotic writing, even when character interaction is paramount. Thank you for sharing? :)
Absolutely awesome! Especially the fact that it was about Female control / domination without inherent hate, humiliation and meanness. I really, really enjoyed the aspect of her being in the box with him sharing his adventure / state / condition and egging him on with enticement and encouragement. Particularly in the scenes where she is directing his attention to fantasy-worthy females and lustily describing their attributes to him and fueling his masturbatory fantasies while she was in control of his actual sensations and reactions. A very, very delightful juxtaposition.
I have always enjoyed the idea of breaching the masturbatory "fourth wall" between the character(s) in the story and the author-- which in this case was slightly different as she was his captor, but still very much the same general feeling of the situation. I especially like the aspect that she is "along for the ride", talking in his ear and (gently) enjoying his predicament and controlling his situation. I wish I could give you TEN stars for this story. PLEASE CONTINUE.
Best story I have read so far! I sure hope you continue this story!!!!
Meinen Glückwunsch, eine äußerst gut (und sehr geil) geschriebene Geschichte, die nach einer Fortsetzung lechzt. Sie hat sehr genau meine Empfindung von einer anregenden Geschichte getroffen. Diese Art von weiblicher Dominanz ist so erschreckend nachvollziehbar be- und geschrieben worden.
This story is really really good. I love the entire torment on poor Senator Kirkwood, the milking and the public humiliation. I also love the threat on the agent's husband.