by Jtb_
Getting better and better. This style really works for the chapter-y release here on Lit.
5*
I enjoy the stream of consciousness style you are using. It takes a little getting used to, but it serves a purpose.
One thing though - women is plural, woman is singular.
Enjoying the story but like someone else commented, I tend to skip the interview dialog at the beginning and end of each chapter. Looking forward to the rest though.