All Comments on 'Applause'

by Zandrite

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 4 years ago

Thanks for this very hands-on experiment that led them to a new experience. My hands squeeze that wonderful sound from raw air artists love so much, again and again and again, hard and fast, painting redness onto cheeks...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Oh yum!

That was absolutely delicious! I could do with the same treatment right about now. This erotic vignette seemed to write itself, it flowed so naturally, a gorgeous erotic spanking. Thank you for sharing!

Tess (UK)

WritingForToffeeWritingForToffeealmost 4 years ago
Intimate, kinky, and sweet...

Great story, an intimate slice of life with a killer finish. I love the way they play, and the way they talk. You write them well, look forward to more from you.

Highly recommended :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Please write more like this.

You made it hot erotic and fun. It was one of the best married sex stories on here.

Anonymous
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Hi, this is Zan. I write stories, poems... and occasionally things you might call a hybrid of the two. I love to hear opinions, so feel free to comment or contact if you have thoughts about what you’ve read. I’m dreamy, idealistic, a little kinky... and prone to such brillia...