All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 01'

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MissedLifeMissedLifeover 4 years ago
Good start

Look forward to seeing where this will lead. Betting Tony and possibly Kelly are not nice people.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hmmm curious

So her boss “My boss was nice. Stern, but kind..” huh she came across as more of a hard faced bitch. A new timid employee gets spooked and panicky when a large intimidating man grabs hold of her and starts interrogating her about her personal life, why would that be a reason to get nasty about it.

It’s well written, I’m just hoping this is a Reluctance story and not a non con rape story.

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow so detailed so brilliant i can relate with her the fear of men like jerry

5 star

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