All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 05'
by AnnieBaebee
- 8 Comments
MickaHollowayover 4 years agoIve been checking daily for an upload. This is definitely a story i cant wait to keep reading. Curious to see which direction this ends up going. Keep up the great work!!
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis story, which is awesome BTW,
makes me think of that song, The Beast
In Me
Anonymousabout 4 years agoJust stated reading the story from the beginning and it has hooked me big time. I totally enjoy your writing. The intensity and creativity is compelling. A human and a wolf (that looks something like a human?). He kept saying that "his wolf will" and "his wolf this" while confronting Annie was a bit concerning. He would never hurt her but he was almost beyond control. I hope that the upcoming chapters will keep me enthralled as the previous ones have.
Anonymousover 3 years agoSecond time reading this series while waiting for ch.19 and picking up on details I totally missed the first time! This story is sooo good.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoOne thing that is VERY tedious in this story is Ethan's constantly stating how sensitive he is and then saying and doing things that are completely insensitive, even after she tells him so. At first it was interesting, but you use it SOOO many times its just make the story tedious and it makes him look very stupid.
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