All Comments on 'Apprentice Dedicant Ch. 01'

Several annoying typos and a few garbled sentenced that jerked me out of the flow of reading. I wouldn't normally bother commenting, but I have the feeling that with a good editor/proofreader this could be a great story.

Howdy, new to this platform and still getting a handle on it. I appreciate you pointing this out, I uploaded my draft version on accident (embarrassing), and just submitted an edited version hopefully that will be up asap