All Comments on 'April and Mark'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good concept, bad execution.

It could have been good, but it really doesn't make much sense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Needs part 2

Has a lot of potential, but really needs the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
um...never says he is bankrupt anywhere...

could have explained things alot better.

TeasingCatTeasingCatover 15 years ago
Great start

Very hot tease and orgasm denial story; I loved it. I wish there was more stories about April.

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